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I wrote my first poem and I posted it. I would like to know what you everyone thinks of it. Please would you read it and let me know. Thank You.

Nice poem. Any of mine would be awesome if you could :)

I r/r/c your first poem. I don't know if you can read explict poems or not, but if not I have some that are dark or sad. You can pick on of them that would be great.

Read the bodys rain please of mine and any other you want :D

xxx alex xxx

Hey.. i read and commented your poem. how about *confused*.. and any other one you want..