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  • ImNotPerfect20
    18 years ago

    Please RRC.. i will do 2 of yours if you do this one.. its called *Everything*

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  • Brittany C
    18 years ago

    Great poem. I would have commented it but I'm having trouble with love poems not leting me. I would have rated it 5/5.

    Please r/r/c two of my older poems they need some loven:)

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  • ImNotPerfect20
    18 years ago

    Anyone else.. My poems are lonely

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  • ImNotPerfect20
    18 years ago

    *bump*

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  • Goran Rahim
    18 years ago

    I will go read some more of your poems and u can do the same if u want to

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  • tyanna
    18 years ago

    Done...I liked the words to it and the emotion but I think you need to work on the flow of it..The flow just didn't seem to be there..I gave it a 4.
    Please do:
    My confessions -and-
    Eternal darkness
    Thanks in advance

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  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    I will read it.

    Can you please do:
    -When I go down[Acrostic]
    -The reason

    Thank you. <3

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  • ImNotPerfect20
    18 years ago

    I will comment your guys poems when i get home.. im actucally at school..

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  • ImNotPerfect20
    18 years ago

    I have already done *The Reason* a couple days before so i will pick another one...

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  • ImNotPerfect20
    18 years ago

    I moved some of the words around so that it would flow a little better.. if you want to read it then thanks!

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  • Sole
    18 years ago

    Read. Good write.
    Any of mine will do thanks!

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