1 for 2, 2 for 3, 3 for 4

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    Any of my latest.
    If you leave me a one liner do not expect a reply.

    If you think it sucks, tell me why and how you think it could be improved.

    If you think it's good tell me why so I know what I am doing right.

    Please PLEASE do not leave comments such as ''lyke so dis was real gud i loved it so much lyke u did a gud job 5/5
    I want to be able to understand the comments.

    Leave titles or links or I wont do them.

    Thank you.
    xxx

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    18 years ago

    Done. I did "I think i've fallen in love with you" (aka My Letter to You)

    Please do any 2 of my featured.

  • tyanna
    18 years ago

    <<Done>> Please do:
    My confessions -and-
    Eternal Darkness

    Btw..I liked you poem..there was only a few things which could be improved..Stephen gave exellent examples on how to do so..Still a 5/5 though..

  • ImNotPerfect20
    18 years ago

    Can you please do..

    *Everything*
    *Pain*
    *I wish*(first poem that i ever wrote)

    (there not nearly as good as yours but hey i tried right)

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    All done.
    Anyone else?
    xxx

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    I done one.

    Can you please do:
    -The last jump
    -The end [Rhyme Royal]
    Thank you.

  • Brittany C
    18 years ago

    Alright I read, commented, and rated two of your poems. Could you please comment and rate my poems

    The Wait
    Like a Thunderstorm
    and
    Killing Me Slowly

    Thanks

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    I r/r/c ed Cold and Lonely. I left comments, honest ones. could u plz do Plain to see the pain. I would appercaite it. Please just like you I don't like one liners. And don't forget to vote.

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    All done.

    Anyone else?
    xx

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    Urm yer i will, you can read any of mine i will do 3 of yours :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    Done :D you are such a good writer and thats no lie xxx alex xxx

  • Curry
    18 years ago

    Hey i commented two of yours. you are a really good writer:]

    will you please comment 3 of mine?
    --This is Love
    --I Hate You
    --Does She?

    thanks:]

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Will you comment
    And don't forget to vote
    On my
    Unknown (Song)
    and
    Into the Heart (Battle)
    ??

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    All done.

    Still open if anyone else is interested.
    xxx

  • Greg Beam
    18 years ago

    I just rated and commented choices. its really good. ive only got three poems so just pick any two of them.

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    All done.

    Anyone else?
    xxx

  • Sweet lig
    18 years ago

    Well i did 3 of urs.. dont worry ur work are truly appreciated.. and i would like to tell u that most important to read a poet is to appreciate and understand and most of all to feel the real emotion of the poet..! and honestly some or ur work are truly have a great emotions.. and thats only from my own i dont know what others think!

    well its my pleasure if u would also check and rrc some of my poetry..

    missing u
    unexpected love
    all alone
    a prayer

    thanks and god bless!

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    All done.

    Anyone else?
    xxx

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    The Tasteless-Please leave titles or links.

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    All done.

    Anyone else?
    xxx

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    All done.
    Anyone else?
    xxx