Time on my hands - who would like comments

  • honeypot
    18 years ago

    Hi All,

    I have a little time on my hands right now so if you would like me to comment on your work drop me a private message and i will get reading :-) you can of course also reply to this post so i know when to get going :-)

    Thanks x

  • ImNotPerfect20
    18 years ago

    Hey. if you want to do some of mine that would be great.. I can do some of yours to if you want..

  • bleeding limegrenn
    18 years ago

    I need more coments i have new ones my goal is to like have on comment for each of my poems

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    Please read my two latest poems the bodys rain and the curse. i will get to yours soon :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • Greg Beam
    18 years ago

    Ive only got 3 poems so u can do them all if u want or just pick one or two of them.

  • honeypot
    18 years ago

    Hey, Im not perfect, I have commented on some of yours and read your work. Well done!

    Unconventional - I like it x

    onto the next :-)

  • skynerraw
    18 years ago

    If you could do one of mine, I'd be happy :) I'll try to do some of yours!

  • honeypot
    18 years ago

    Hey Elijah,
    Cool work !
    Have commented

    Next! x

  • Chrissie
    18 years ago

    I would really love it if you commented on my newest 'The Titanic Story'
    Thankz
    Xx Chrissie

  • honeypot
    18 years ago

    Hi,

    managed to comment on everyones before bed time!
    thankyou for replying to my post. Keep up the good work, some inspiring work I have read tonight.

    Sweetdreams x

  • bleeding limegrenn
    18 years ago

    Thanks for the comments

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Hello =]
    Will you comment and vote
    On my poem
    Our Song
    ??
    Please and thank you =p

  • Cherise
    18 years ago

    "Loves Resurrection" please

    thanks :)

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    Plz read my new poem Demon Within
    Thanks

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    You could do any [or all =)] of these [they're new, and mostly short...]:

    Thanks!

    You Eclipsed By Me {Rondeau}
    Let Not Nautre {Triple Tanka}
    Dragonflies and Astronauts - Schizophrenia {Triple Triolet}
    Like Toy Soldiers {Quadruple Triquatrain}
    Oh, Bright Morning Star {Septuplet Tanka}

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Cantchangeme
    18 years ago

    If you could comment that would be koolishly awesome just any comments been away for ages like

  • honeypot
    18 years ago

    Hello,

    I will get onto the latest requests this evening :-) x

  • The Pessimistic Peabody
    18 years ago

    I would really appreciate it if you would do troubled water and dead end please. thnx

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Thank youu.

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    If you could please, do any of mine.

    Thanks in advance, Joe

  • omgitsmina
    18 years ago

    I'd be happy if you would r/r/c my latest poem The Onset of Putrefaction. If you want me to return the favor just ask. ^.^

    Thanks.
    <33

  • e LIZ a beth
    18 years ago

    Hello there :]

    id appreciate it if you would critique my newest poem, "empty" ill do one of yours in return if you'd like.

    :] thanks in advance