Impress me.

  • AlaSkA
    18 years ago

    Do 1 of my poems, any one. and leave me 2 titles of your most impressive work. no blah blah, no cliche.
    somthing that will insipire me or make me think.
    none of that my girlfreind/boyfriend left me im sad ...

    if they truly are impressive you will make it onto my favoites list.

  • Kelsea
    18 years ago

    Haha...I'm afraid of being too cliche XDD

  • AlaSkA
    18 years ago

    Afraid to break from the norm?

  • dollwithafrown
    18 years ago

    I did "Geometry".

    Could you please do:

    "My Sister's Keeper"
    and
    "Does this Darkness Have a Name?"

    Thanks.

  • AlaSkA
    18 years ago

    I will. ps. my i's arent capitalized on purpose. (:

    will get to you soon.

    who else?

  • dollwithafrown
    18 years ago

    Why don't you capitalise your 'I's?

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Alright.
    Will you do comment
    And don't forget to vote
    On my
    Be my escape
    And
    More Than Useless?
    Thankies =P

  • Synh
    18 years ago

    Sure.

    The Clown
    Never Wake

    I'll do your poem in a bit, i gotta do chores now :(

  • Greg Beam
    18 years ago

    Alright i did one of yours. check out my Sad Love Story and I Wished for You

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    Ok urm... lol

    The bodys rain
    The curse

    thank youuuuuuuu xxxx

  • SSSAAMMMYY
    18 years ago

    You can comment on any. i will try to comment on at least 4 of yours!

  • SSSAAMMMYY
    18 years ago

    Haha i didnt read the top. can you read 'You destroyed my life' and why is our friendship over. THANKS!

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    Ok I will do it. Can you read visions.

  • Chad Picard
    18 years ago

    I accept your challenge!

    I've rated and rated one of your pieces and left you titles of two of mine in my comment. Enjoy! :)

  • Brittney Follett
    18 years ago

    Hey, I'll get on yours now... hmm. Impressive work...

    I did a story.. but written as poetry.. rhyming aabb... and it was four pages long. that was impressive but ...

    'Do I Know You?'

    and

    'Chaotic Mind'

    thanks babe

  • AlaSkA
    18 years ago

    Alright, came back and am getting to them soon, some tonight and others after the HBO fight tomorrow.

    anyone else?

  • cowgirlstar26
    18 years ago

    The black rose garden (may be a bit cliche for you but you never know)
    and foreshadowing a life, my best are actually at my locker but these will have to do for now

  • Perfection
    18 years ago

    Try "war is cruel" or "a soldiers fate" or "The fate of the hungry"... those might be my thinking poems...

  • Darkening Dawn
    18 years ago

    Just my Shakespearean sonnet or anything else. don't really mind. i can comment on yours for no favours, you can if you want.

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Okay there you go hun. =]

    `Poisonous Release
    `Rusty Broken Chains [Kyrielle]

    I think they were kind of unique. Thanks, xx.

  • AlaSkA
    18 years ago

    Ok getting to more of you, tonight. (;