Honest Feedback 1 for 2 or 2 for 3

Hey everyone,
I want honest feedback on the following poems please;

- Simply - My Sanctuary

- Bulimia Will Kill (Acrostic)

-Two Half's Are Now One

I want honesty on these poems, honesty helps me improve. Your comments must show that you've acctually read the poem(s).
In retun ill do 2/3/4 of your poems. No explicit poems please. Leave titles if you want specific one's doing.

Thanks in advance.
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Done I did one of yours :P you can do any of mine that catches your eyes. :)

K done guys..
Ive got another poem im gonna add on this so if anyone wants to ocmment on that its appreciated! :)
xx

Hi i've done two of urs and i would return the favor if u dont mind... i want u to read my 3 lates poems and thanks.....