Yay? Nay? You never know unless you play :]

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When You Kiss Me ; By:Carrie - I absolutely adored the imagery in this poem. The first line opened and it was like BAM! Lol, you kept me interested throughout the whole poem and I think, out of all the contests of mine you have entered...this is my favorite one that I have read so far. Great job Hunn! :]
SPELLING - 3/3
CONTENT - 5/5
FLOW - 5/5
GRAMMAR - 4/5
FOLLOWED RULES - 2/2
TOTAL - 19/20

No One Needs To Know ; By: Carrie - This one too, the imagery was amazing. Your word choice was appropriate and you stayed on topic the entire poem without skipping back and forth on ideas. Good job. :]
SPELLING - 2.5/3
CONTENT - 5/5
FLOW - 5/5
GRAMMAR - 5/5
FOLLOWED RULES - 2/2
TOTAL - 19.5/20

It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing ; By:Lauren - I haven't read a rape story quite like this before, I have read many of them, written a few...but this one was different...your word choice stuck out to me as did your imagery. Great job. :]
SPELLING - 2.5/3
CONTENT - 4.5/5
FLOW - 5/5
GRAMMAR - 4/5
FOLLOWED RULES - 2/2
TOTAL - 18/20

I'm No Quitter ; By: Heavy Hearts Bleed - Your word choice and imagery was great, and I also liked the repetition of the first stanza when you rewrote it at the end, it made the idea of the poem stick out more. The flow was a bit off, but it wasn't anything too serious. The only other thing that I noticed that stuck out to me was "im" should be "I'm". Other than that, great job Dear. :]
SPELLING - 2.5/3
CONTENT - 4/5
FLOW - 4/5
GRAMMAR - 4.5/5
FOLLOWED RULES - 2/2
TOTAL - 17/20

The Woman In Me ; By:Charisma - Aweeeeh! I effing love this poem! It brought tears to my eyes and I can relate very easily to it which is a good thing because it is what a lot of readers look for when they read poetry. You did a really good job with the ending, usually strong poems will end up weak at the end but this one didn't at all; it got stronger. You have a talent Hun, and it shines through more and more with each new poem I read of yours. :]
SPELLING - 3/3
CONTENT - 5/5
FLOW - 5/5
GRAMMAR - 4/5
FOLLOWED RULES - 2/2
TOTAL - 19/20

Love Gets Me Every Time ; By:Sandy - This was cute, it was a lot more original than some poems are these days, which is always a good thing. There were a few times where I had to stop and reread lines because your words were incomplete...but other than that, I couldn't find much else wrong with it. Good job, :]
SPELLING - 1.5/3
CONTENT - 4/5
FLOW - 5/5
GRAMMAR - 4/5
FOLLOWED RULES - 2/2
TOTAL - 16.5/20

Up! [Jump Up! and Pour on the Syrup] ; By: Sheena - Lol, wow. Is this ever a different type of poem from you, eh? I loved it. I love the goofy side of Sheena, Lol. The way you wrote this poem was remarkable, I was able to read through it without losing focus and it kept me interested and made me smile, so there's a bonus for you, haha.
SPELLING - 2.5/3
CONTENT - 4/5
FLOW - 4/5
GRAMMAR - 5/5
FOLLOWED RULES - 2/2
TOTAL - 17.5/20

When You Kiss Me ; By:Britt - Wow! Explicittttt lmao, I love you and I love this poem. Shows me a different side to you, and it is a side that you are still able to have control over and come out with a masterpiece, I fricken loved this. :] <3
SPELLING - 3/3
CONTENT - 5/5
FLOW - 5/5
GRAMMAR - 5/5
FOLLOWED RULES - 2/2
TOTAL - 20/20

From This Moment On ; By:Donna - I loved your word choice in this poem and you were able to write this while staying on track and not skipping around or overloading it with pointless jumbo words and figurative language lol. Anyways, Great job Hun, I enjoyed reading this. :]
SPELLING - 3/3
CONTENT - 4.5/5
FLOW - 5/5
GRAMMAR - 4/5
FOLLOWED RULES - 2/2
TOTAL - 18.5/20

"No One Needs To Know" & "When You Kiss Me"

She's Not Just A Pretty Face
It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing

i would like to do these two,
nessa

The Woman in Me Plz...

Charisma*

That don't impress me much please.
=)

'From This Moment On' please :]

It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing please!

When You Kiss Me

Your lips burn like the sun,
Kissing my skin with fire,
Lost to lust, I'm giving in,
I'm feeding your desire.

I feel the want within your kiss,
It melts me deep inside,
I wish to quench your hungry thirst,
It cannot be denied.

One sultry look and I am bound,
Flesh to flesh, united,
Never shall I taste regret,
For what we have ignited.

When you kiss me all else fades,
Your lips are all I know,
All I need or all I want,
Emotions overflow.

No One Needs To Know

No one needs to know,
The hurt I feel inisde,
The pain that eats my strength away,
The waves that won't subside.

My bitter battle fought,
I'm still trying to recover,
And I hide it all away,
In hopes they wont discover.

The world sees pain and thinks of weak,
But my strength is all I own,
It shall never be surrendered,
No blood comes from a stone.

No one needs to know I dream,
And no one needs to speak,
To make me love this life again,
To give me what I seek.

Um is swearing against the rules?

Well if it isn't, heres the link to my poem:
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=891080

and if it is please PM me so i can make another,,

It's not against the rules, as long as it's not too excessive.

Heavy Hearts,

If it doesn't rhyme, it'll just effect the way I judge it since rhyming is in the rules. It's really up to you.

The Woman In Me

It's that smile you give when something's on your mind
How I can call you and you answer whatever the time,
The playful jokes filled up with hidden meanings
Wondering inside if they truly do mean anything.
An encouraging word when you can tell I'm at a low
Though I never said a thing, and it doesn't show.
The way we don't hug, like it hides anything at all,
Because you always catch me, whenever I do fall.
And on the other side, I've always been there too
I know the woman in me, loves the man in you.

By: Charisma*

Who's bed have your boots been under please xx

Up! Please.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I changed the title a bit..added to it, really. If that's not ok, I can easily change it back.
Anyways. This is ment to be funny and stupid, so read it if you want to laugh!
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Up! [Jump Up! and Pour on the Syrup]

Jump up! and pour on the syrup,
Take your time and let it drizzle;
Jump up! and pour on the syrup.

Taste it's glory; for shizzle my nizzle!
Jump up! and pour on the syrup;
Take your time and let it drizzle.

Listen tight; don't interupt,
There's nothing to this game,
Jump up! and pour of the syrup.

Pf, pancakes are lame;
Who likes flour?
There's nothing to this game.

We've got all the power;
Don't let the city take your town;
Who likes flour?

Stick to syrup and gulp it down,
Jump up! and pour on the syrup,
Don't let the city take your town,
Jump up! and pour on the syrup.
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1. A
2. B
3. A
4. b
5. C
6. B
7. c
8. D
9. C
10. d
11. E
12. D
13. e
14. F
15. E
16. f
17. A
18. F
19. A

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Can i have ur still the one? thanks

The rules have now been changed, it is one person per title.

From This Moment On

From this moment on,
things will never be the same.
Through one forgotten night,
into my life You came.

From this moment on,
for You I'll always care.
Whatever the future holds,
I'll always be right there.

From this moment on,
You'll have a part of me.
You've got into my heart,
that's how it'll always be.

From this moment on,
I'll have to deal with the fear.
That I'll awake one day,
and You will not be here.

From this moment on,
and right through 'til the end.
[I'm hoping there'll be more]
but I'll always be your friend.

This is now closed.

Thanks to all who joined and the judging will take place shortly.

First off, let me say I think this is my most successful contest so far...not in the fact of responses it got. But because of the poetry that was submitted into it. Each poem was wonderful, I really enjoyed reading them. First and Second I changed my mind a few times on, it was a very hard choice...

Also, sorry this took so long for the results to come in. Been busy with school and judging other contests as well. But I still got it done! Lol.
<3
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First: Charisma; The Woman In Me
Second: Britt; When You Kiss Me
Third: Sheena; Up!
HM: Carrie; No one Needs To Know

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First: 8 r/r/c
Second: 6 r/r/c
Third: 4 r/r/c
HM: 2 r/r/c
Everyone else: 1 r/r/c

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01. Charisma

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02. Britt

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03. Sheena

- Any -- [DONE]
- Any -- [DONE]
- Any -- [DONE]
- Any -- [DONE]

HM. Carrie

- Any -- [DONE]
- Any -- [DONE]

Thanks so much Lush, any of my latest would be great. Way to go everyone :)

You're kidding?
I got third.
Wowww.. I was just having fun with that. xD
Thank you so much, then. I'm really glad I could make you smile.

And.
I'm not sure what titles you have and haven't done. May I say just pick and choose what's your favorite?

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I am utterly astonished! Thank you so much! If you could just comment my most recent 8 that would be great! Thank you so much! Congrats to everyone!
Charisma*

P.S. I like the way you critique everyone's poems and show us how you analyze them. I think that's what this site is all about!