My poem

I know im not gonna rate on this poem very well but i would like some comments on it anyway,
can someone plz send me some comments on my new poem face pant? thanks

I'll brb after doing yours...could u do my latest "You're mine" in return..thnx

I can...;)
i did...;)
(why wouldn't you rate very well?? the poem is awesome...)
you're welcome
=)
*isabel*

*you are free to check mine out (that's why i'm posting them xD...) if you want to (only if you want to...)
=))