New you

Plz comment this poem and if u want rate it.. tell me a poem u want commented and i will.. thx

Plzz sum1

My computer or this site logs me out before I can RRC, but I read your poem any way. The flow was really well done and the topic kept me interested throughout the entire poem. I loved the aspect of "the new you". It is so true and meaningful. I don't know if this counts as a comment, but if it does, any poem will sufice. If not, then that's okay too.
Keep it up,
Hatori
The Illusionist