A new poem

Name : crystaljean88
Status : Regular Member
Joined : Dec 7, 2005
Posts : 282

I jus wrote a new poem and i know the ending isnt very good... the flow kinda went off the wrong way.. i would like some advice to redo the ending.. and plzz comment what i have, i will return the favor

- Name : crystaljean88
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- Joined : Dec 7, 2005
- Posts : 282
crystaljean88
18 years ago

Muh bad, lol i forget to tell u the name

good times

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- Name : Romancing the Darker Side
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- Posts : 612
Romancing the Darker Side
18 years ago

I just commented it, if you have the time, could you please do, "In Animal Form"? Thanks.

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- Name : Robert
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- Joined : Aug 31, 2004
- Posts : 566
Robert
18 years ago

Ok then I will take a look at it please comment and vote on any of my featured work

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- Name : crystaljean88
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- Posts : 282
crystaljean88
18 years ago

Okay.. done
ne1 else

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