1 for 1 The Northmen.

I have a new poem up..can you r/r/c on it..
I had a really bad case of writers block. and this is the first one after it.. it might be a little rough at times.. if you see any mistakes can you please tell me i plan on sending this poem to The Northmen..
they are a Gospel group..
anyway thanks ahead of time.

Bump.. someone help me.. lol