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  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    *Fallen Angels

    If you leave a one liner don't expect a reply.

    Please do not leave comments where you ''ryte like dis''

    I can handle critiscim (sp?)

    Leave links or titles or I wont do them.

    Thank you, have a nice day.
    xxx

  • unknown
    18 years ago

    I do your fallen angels...
    Great poem...
    It's so powerful...
    I want you to read mine...
    -she's crying. she's waiting
    If you don't mine, also read:
    -grateful friend
    -my last words
    -corruptor and farmer
    please leave a comment, or suggestions for me for better poem... ^^
    Just if you dont mind.. ^^
    Thx..
    >Edo<

  • xxSnow Angelxx
    18 years ago

    Done..Nice work
    Do what u can of mine..No probs otherwise..It was a pleasure reading your work!
    xxPoojaxx

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    Go Orlando-your poems are done.

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    XxHe is mY LiFexx- your poems ae done.

    Anyone else?
    xxx

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    Bleeding For His Amusement-I will get to your's by Monday at the latest, I can't concentrate to much right now as I have my four year old sister with me.

    Anyone else?
    xxx

  • Sweet lig
    18 years ago

    What a poem... very adorable! well done....

    just do my 3 latest poems thanks and god bless!

  • firexdancer
    18 years ago

    Okay. i did it!!
    please do
    ~eyes of a raven
    ~breathe me
    and then any other one you like!!!
    thx so much
    gabriella

  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    Will do
    thx
    needing you close
    dreams and reality
    you i will yearn

  • Boy
    18 years ago

    Do any three whihc you have notdone b4 i am reading your fallen angel now take care. see have you rated
    i was alone in your city one of my poem. ?

  • Marc Ortiz
    18 years ago

    Heya I did yours :D

    Please read

    1. A Paradise in my Heart
    2. She's the One {Revised}
    3. Those Three Sweet Words

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Please do
    Greed of Lust and Love
    Wake Up Older
    And
    Lust
    Appreciate it =]

  • Isabelle
    18 years ago

    Can you do three of mine? You can pick from my featured, although I would like you do Come back to me one day(it's not on that list). Please and thanks. I will read yours in a moment. :D

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    I di it! can you plz do these for me?
    *The Scent of Sex and Sweat
    *Another Dream
    *And any thing else that catches your eye
    Thanks in advance

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    Bleeding For His Amusement-your poems are done
    Sweet lig-your poems are done
    gabriella-your poems are done
    Kaila-your poems are done

    I shall return to commenting tomorrow, as I have to leave shortly.

    Anyone else?
    xxx

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    All done

    Anyone else?
    xxx

  • Karl Wild GG23
    18 years ago

    I just finished r/r/c your poem and it was excellent, could you please do my poems called:

    The Edge of Eternity
    My Never Ending Dream
    Ivory Black

    Please and thanks

    P.S. please remember to vote

    GG23

  • dollwithafrown
    18 years ago

    Done. ^_^

    Could you please do:

    `6345789
    `A Sinner Like Me
    `Gone With the Sin

    Thank you.

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    SecludedSerendipity-your poems are done
    Karl-I have commented those three under my old name, I think I have commented most of your poems...I'm going to go and do your newest ones that I haven't...hope that's okay.

    Anyone else?
    xxx

  • Karl Wild GG23
    18 years ago

    Haha my bad lol Ya thats definately cool have a good day and thanks again.

    GG23

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago

    The next 10 people to comment Fallen Angels, I shall do four instead of three.

    No one liners.

    Be honest with your critiscim (sp?)

    Anyone?
    xxx