I'll read/vote/comment on your poems

oh yea, I remember, its called "Alone in the World"

if you have time do you think you could read and comment/rate any of my poems, i dont get much feedback and i would like some to get better. thank you.

you don't get much feedback?! you deserve it!

thanks for reviewing, btw

Morgan- thanks for reviewing & I did add more, thanks for the suggestion

can u read some of mine? i'll do the same for you.

I agree, great work!

anyone else?

i'd love to, i am very bored =) thanks for giving me something to do!

i commented on two, awesome poems =)

yup, no problem & have a Merry Christmas, everyone =)

The one of mine called 'Letting Go Of Inhibitions...' that would mean a lot if you could comment honestly.

Comments and votes are always appreciated!

~Ciao Lipton

sorry it took me a day, but I commented for both of yours, awesome poems =)

please please please comment...it would mean so much to me

yup i did, thanks for reviewing mine & sorry it took a day =)

can u please read,vote, and comment my poems especially the one called "Missing so much of my Heart" i would great appriecate it. thanx

yup, i did, nice work =)

Can you check a few of mine out, my fav is soldier boy:) Thank-you

yup i did, very nice =)

hey Erica, I really don't need you to read/comment on mine, only if you want to. I need help in trying to figure out what category my new poem should go in. its part nature and part sad, but then at the end it's happy (if you know what I mean). anyway, here is the poem:

Leaving Behind Trials and Tribulations (Crimson Cries)

As it snows it reminds me of the crimson cries
Falling to the ground like that of God’s winter tears
Erasing all the lines of wrong paths taken
And trying to delete all the scars and suffering

As I look out the sheer glass window into the backyard
I think of how good my life used to be
Now tears of sadness replace those of contentment
And I have no one to turn to for my grief

I just want to be blissful again
I want to cry clear tears instead of scarlet
I want to know what its like to frolic through meadows
And play hide-and-seek in the abundant woods again

So let this snow slide off my windowsill
Therefore I can see rays of hope and happiness
Shining to give me a cue to spread my wings
And leave all these trials and tribulations behind

Thanks if you can help me figure this out! =]

If you really want my opinion, I think it would be nature, but you are right, it could seen as a metaphor for sadness (sorry i'm doing poetry at school =) So if you want people to think into it, then I would put it into sad...Wow, that is an AWESOME poem, I really like it, sorry it took me a while to respond. I think i'm going to go read some of yours anyway, cuz i really like this one.

yup i did, awesome poem =)

awesome poems everyone & Happy New Year!
-Erica

I'm still willing to read/vote/review peoples, but i'd REALLY appreciate if you could comment on my newest poem, go here: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=229176

thanks,
Erica

yup i reviewed some more, awesome poems!, thanks!

Hey, I was wondering if you'd be interested in reading and commenting/voting on my poems? I'd really like it a lot and appreciate it. Thanks!

Tyler

yup, no problem!

=)

anyone else?

yup, no problem!

It'd be nice if you glanced at a few of my new ones. I'll look at your poems! You have an awesome name.

sure, thanks! and you have an awesome name, too.. =)

i know i keep writing things, but otherwise people don't know that i am still willing to read/comment on their poems, so yes =)

-Erica

I would really appreciate it if you would read, comment, and rate some of my poems.

yup, i did

Can you read mine, any of mine? Thanx so much.

yup, i did, but its kinda hard to do constructive criticism for yours, cause they are really good
-Erica

yup, sorry it took me awhile

hi, hope i'm not bothering any of you.

if you have some time, i've wrote a couple of poems. would love the one called "driftwood" to be looked over, the love ones are hugely flawed but kinda exactly as i mean them to be. but i have no such excuses for "driftwood". thanks for your time :o)