New Poem (If You Are My Shooting Star)(Open Offers!)

The offer is maleable, so just name your offer and I'll approve or disapprove it =]

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=901996

The poem is featured, as well =] Entitled: If You Are My Shooting Star

Offer whatever you believe is fair or whatever you believe is your minimum offer =]

Thanks,
~Stephen White

Do not just vote. Leave a comment. It annoys me.

And one-liner's and crappy comments will not be returned.

I wrote a poem today of a personal nature inspired by a young lady who is going through some insecurity issues. I could not contain my pleasure that she seemed to desire my attention. I have security issues with my writing abilities, and paid an editor to edit my book. She seems to be doing quite well after publishing with the company I chose.
If you wish, you may critique a sample through iUniverse using my name in the author browse section. My editor is Dorothy Womack .

Please comment on my last post "April"

...I asked if you would politely read my poetry at a significant moment in time. You simply REJECTED me.

Ok. So that's a tad melo-dramatic- but it's the truth. The brutal and sadistic truth.

I shall leave and weep in a neglected corner, a corner which you have fabricated for those whom you ignore and are careless of.

:P

Elysium. In case you didn't hear, I have finals this week. I have publicly notified everyone I am NOT returning comments until AFTER this week, because it's a matter of PASS/FAIL for me. I hope you understand that I am trying to do the best I can. If you would like to have a copy of my study guides, you will notice that they are HUGE.

I am returning these, but I have had dozens of Private Messages from different people requesting I comment on their poems. It gets pretty tiring, dear. I will do it after this week. I promise.

Http://www.iuniverse.com/bookstore/book_detail.asp?isbn=0-595-31636-0

Hahaha. Deary, I was playing with your head. I have no problem with waiting. I am simply bored out of my head sitting on this seat and speculating my revision guide for an hour and a half. I too, have a exams tomorrow (and they too, are a matter of 'pass and fail' for me) :). Therefore, take your time and get back whenever you will :).

Done:) Please rate and comment

When I'm Not With You
and
Finally Over

Please and thanks:)

Will do =]

Done =]

Anyone else?