New poem...could you please comment? favors returned...=))

This is not one of my bests, the flow is a little off and it's a bit long...
but you would made my day if you commented it...
what i've written means a lot to me...
and i'd surely return the favour...

it's called "Confusing Thoughts of Loneliness"

thanks :)

(oh, and could you please vote? =D)

*isabel*

I dont have time right now, but i read the first the first few linse and decided i loved it so far. i marked it, and ill come back to it when i get time too.

if you can check out painted skys or the collab.

thnks.

Thanks =))
i'll check yours in an hour or two...

anyone else?

I checked out painted sky...
it was really good...

it seems like no one else is up for it...=(
well, it's okay...

peace =)

*isabel*