Poems... Comments... good stuff. xD

I've been writing a lot lately, and I just put up a bunch of new poems. No doubt this entry will get edited once even newer stuff is put on here, but for the now, could you please take a look at any of these -

o1. Do You Want to Know a Secret?
o2. The Voices that Betray Me
o3. He Paints Me Blue
o4. I Could Fly
o5. Twenty Years and Two Husbands Ago
o6. Paint and Pillows {Triple Triolet}
o7. A Seaside Image
o8. See the Creature

However many you decide to do, I'll will return the favour + 1. *Please* leave detailed comments. I usually try to make my comments longer than three lines at least, so I'd really appreciate if you could do the same for me.

Please keep checking back even if I've already returned the favour as different poems may have been put up.

I did 03 and 04

Could you please do?
-Seasons In The Sun
And any two that's on my featured

Thanks alot
Laura

Returned. :] Thank you.

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Hello?

I did #5 it was very good!!!

Could u do forever gone or story of love...which ever one you want to do

I did them both.

Thanks! i know that i need to add capitolization and punctuation but lately i haven't had time. those are some of my older poems.

I did two of yours, they were great.
please do my last two poems,

thanks alot.

Hi

I did Seaside Image and Twenty Years and Two Husbands Ago. Both very good!! I like your style of writing. :)

If you could do I Love and One Hundred Million Tomorrows and anything else on my featured stuff. Thanks.

Mo
xx

I did 1, 5, 6 ,8 You can do any of my latest that you have not already done thanks in advance.

I did 6 & 7. You have amazing talent.

Could you please do;
"Exhausting Lies"
"Unfamiliar Reflection"
"Today's Problems & Tomorrow's Hopelessness"

Thank you so much.

I'll most likely be coming back tomorrow to read more of your stuff. I love it. =]

Tammie

Thank you so much for the comments everyone. They are much appreciated. All have now been returned.

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Heya I did

o1. Do You Want to Know a Secret?
o2. The Voices that Betray Me

Could you please read.

1. My Last Farewell
2. A Paradise in my Heart
3. Those Three Sweet Words

Please vote too. :) -thanks