New poem "Father, I don't see the world"

Please read and leave comments and suggestions.
"Father, I don't see the world"
and if you don't mind, also read:
"Depressed Flower"
"She's crying, she's waiting"
"Corruptor and farmer "
"My Last Words"
and "Grateful friend"
I'LL RETURN A FAVOR IF YOU ASK ME... ^^
Thx anyway....

Hey,i reviewed "father i dont see the world" could you please review my "fathers day" acrostic.
thanks
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I commented and rated you poem 'Father I don't See the World'. Couldn't find much to critique it was well written. I'd be most grateful if you could review my 'A Night Beneath the Star Filled Sky'.
vielen Dank. :)

I've done yours... Thx you very much... ^^