Good critiques, please.

I have eight new poems that don't have any comments as of yet. Some of them, I find, are really poor in comparison to what I can do, so I'd really appreciate some good critiques on my writing. No one liners. Please check out any or all of these:

o1. I Sold Daddy's Little Girl
o2. Entering the Circus
o3. Broken Man
o4. Hello, My Name is Distance {Trijan Refrain}
o5. Cold December {Terzanelle}
o6. Distance is Darkness
o7. Bridge of Reason, Shore of Faith
o8. Dance Hall Drug
o9. Butterfly With Midnight Wings

However many you decide to do, the favour will be doubled, but you MUST leave titles. Oh and please vote, too. I always return it.

...anybody? At all?

Returned. xD

Hey. I did two of yours. Couldn't find any flaws.

I'm not sure if you have done some of these or not but could you please do
-The death of those who starve
-Cannibals of the riverside
-The heart of the ocean
-He is my life.

thanks alot ~mel

You are a very good writer i dont think you need much help

^ Thank you. Are you wanting the comments returned? because if so, please leave titles. :]

SlaveToTheMusic - all yours have now been returned.

Hi!

Could you please comment on:

You Left Nothing
Not okay
Blank emptiness
She Needs No Love

Thanks. =)

And I really enjoyed reading your poems. I hope you enjoy reading mine.

Thanks. Yours have been returned. :]