Cannibals of the riverside

Ok guys, I havn't written in a little while now so my latest is up called "cannibals of the riverside" Its not one of my best but I'd like to know what you think.

-If you leave one liners I'll leave them in return.
-Leave me titles or I will pick at random.
-Vote or i wont vote on your poem.

Simple enough huh =)

The deals basic If you do that poem I will do no more then 3 for you. So basically a 1 for 3 deal we got going here.

~mel