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Name : Marc Ortiz
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I have a new poem called

'Together as One'

Please Rate and comment it and I shall return the favor for 3 :) - I always rate.

*leave titles. Or I'll do random xD
*No one liners. - I wont comment back.
*Please leave honest comments it will help me improve.
*Have fun!

- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

Okay please do 2 poems :) any of my featured please :) I'll do 6 of yours

What poems do you want me to read?

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I'll read it tom. sorry :| gtg. But I promise I'll read all 6 :)

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- Name : Loved In Hell
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Loved In Hell
18 years ago

Got it done thank you

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Name : Debbie
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Debbie
18 years ago

There you go. (I hope my honesty wasn't too harsh...)

The following aren't my best works, but I hope you'll still r/r/c them:

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=873771
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=873568
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=873745

Thanks so much, Kabz. =]

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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours EndOfTheBeginning :D

Anyone else?

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- Name : BrokenREALiTy
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BrokenREALiTy
18 years ago

Done .
Could you please do :

`Priceless Occasion
`Acceptance
And whatever catches your eye ?

Thanks, dear .
..__MiNDYY

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours Britt! :D

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours Debbie/Marian

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- Name : Stephanie Naylor
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Stephanie Naylor
18 years ago

K, i did that one for you

can you please r/r/c

my latest 3 poems

please and thank you

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours livin in a lonely hell

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- Name : Sweet Fragility
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Sweet Fragility
18 years ago

Alritie i'll do 2 so can you do all 6 of mine? thanks in advance

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- Name : Sweet Fragility
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Sweet Fragility
18 years ago

I commented yours... not i'm just waiting...

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- Name : Kara P
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Kara P
18 years ago

I will do 2 of urs if you do all 5 of mine.
Plz and thx u.

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours XxX Synthetic Tears Run DryXxX

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours BrokenREALiTy/Mindy

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Name : Mo
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Mo
18 years ago

Hi Marc - I did two of yours - you definitely have a very different writing technique - I like it!!! :)

Please can you do whichever of my featured poems that catch you eye. Many thanks! Enjoy your weekend

Mo

- Name : Boy
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Boy
18 years ago

I done,

plz do for my latest poem

"will i always love you"?

plz don't forget to rate aswell. thanx

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- Name : disturbed one
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disturbed one
18 years ago

I'll do it

can you please read...

The Ghost Name Love
Stars(Acrostic)
Another Day Gone

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours Stephanie Naylor

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours Sweet Fragility

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I'm going to comment on everyone tomorrow. - Sorry for the late comment :)

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours Mo :)

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- Name : Fsams
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Fsams
18 years ago

Wow great poem. Plse rrc these poems.

1. that is the deal candy
2. love is a burden
3. english for the confused
thanks a lot. tc

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours forever in love

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours disturbed one

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- Name : Spirit
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Spirit
18 years ago

Hey i'm in
please read

*the wanted flight not given
*tell me why
*the last day

these are my best

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Name : Andrew Morton
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Posts : 58

Andrew Morton
18 years ago

Alright bud..i did two...im really impressed, im going to go through more when i get the chance to, your an incredible writer

- You've Left Today
- Fall To Pieces
- My Two Cents
- Souls of Ours
- Blink
- Do You Remember My Name?

if you could do those for me when you get the chance, I would really appreciate it

Keep up the great work, and keep that pen going!

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