*important* ONE for FIVE

I desperately need suggestions and comments for the last song posted called "You've Left Today"..I'm going to be submitting this one to an agency so hopefully I can work for them.

Here's a direct link..if it doesnt work its called "You Left Today"

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=919224

SIDE NOTE: No one liners...the whole "you give one line, you get one line" doesnt apply..one liners get nothing..I dont mean to be picky or rude, but this is really important to me and I need honest feedback..thank you! Please post which ones you want me to comment on in return..happy reading

Done i done of your oe poem..
sory my exams i am busy!!!

plz do for my poems

"will i alwasy love you"

"i was alone nyour city"

and other three whihc catch your attentiopn
thanx alot
bye'

Finished!...anyone else?

Could you please r/r/c

Confused
Don't Hide
Love and Darkness
Anger
and
Memories of the Past

Thank:)

Ill do yours for you, pick any of mine you want to =) thanx!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Kirsten---completed

I will complete the rest when I get home tonight..thanks everyone

I've r/r/c your song and it was great, could you please do the same for my poems called:

Sweet Love's Deceit
Undesirable Reality
The Innocence of Youth
The Edge of Eternity
Temptation's Angry Flame

P.S. please vote as I voted yours

GG23

Done your song was nicely written, could you please do,
-the pain you gave me over 3 years
-what would i do
-Undying love
-alone
-broken heart

please and thank you.

I'll read it and rate it, pick any 5 of mine,

Alright...im gunna close it for now until ive caught up...i will reopen it once im finished

forever in love
Kirsten
EndOfTheBeginning
Fire lilies
Jacqui Armstrong
Karl Wild AKA GodsGift
nikki

you guys are all done..excellent work to you all..i hope my comments helped..even just a bit --- still chuggin away it..thanks for the patience guys

Great great song!!! I did rrc it with all my heart.
Could you plse rrc these ones

1. Love is a burden
2. English for the confused
3. Incomplete without you
4. That is the deal candy
5. I am yours

* If you have done any of these, you can select any new ones*
Thanks a lot in advance.

I would really appreciate your comments but plse do vote :)

Good song man. Well may you please do any five when find the time to. Thanks.

My computer has been up and down..like i said in a previous post..im going to close it until im up and running smoothly...i will certainly get around to it though