GOOD DEAL RIGHT HEREEEEEE

  • Molly Elizabeth
    18 years ago

    Ok so I really would love to get more comments on my poems. So heres the deal... leave me a nice/constructive comment on 1, or 2 of my poems... and leave me a list of all the poems you'd like me to comment for you... (keep it 10 or under please...) and i'll comment your poems in the morning when I wake up.. ok? So all you have to do is comment a poem or 2, and leave me a list IN THE COMMENT PLEASE of what poems you'd like to comment/rate for you... ok? Thanks loves!

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    I did three of your poems, they were superb. If you could rrc these poems I would be glad and will honestly appreciate.

    1. Incomplete without you (Part I)

    2. Incomplete without you (Part II)

    3. Love is a burden

    4. English for the confused

    5. Thank you

    6. That is the deal candy

    Thanks a lot in advance. Tc

  • nikki
    18 years ago

    I did 3 of your they were great, could you please do

    1-My sweet rose (acrostic)

    2-All i have to do is dream

    3-The lies of a smile

    4-Please remember (acrostic)

    5-Memories of our love

    6-Last kiss (double acrostic)

    thank you