The best poem ever written and why (opinions vary)

  • Karl Wild GG23
    16 years ago

    IF

    Rudyard Kipling

    If you can keep your head when all about you
    Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,
    If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you
    But make allowance for their doubting too,
    If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
    Or being lied about, don't deal in lies,
    Or being hated, don't give way to hating,
    And yet don't look too good, nor talk too wise:
    If you can dream--and not make dreams your master,
    If you can think--and not make thoughts your aim;
    If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
    And treat those two impostors just the same;
    If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
    Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
    Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
    And stoop and build 'em up with worn-out tools:

    If you can make one heap of all your winnings
    And risk it all on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
    And lose, and start again at your beginnings
    And never breath a word about your loss;
    If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
    To serve your turn long after they are gone,
    And so hold on when there is nothing in you
    Except the Will which says to them: "Hold on!"

    If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,
    Or walk with kings--nor lose the common touch,
    If neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you;
    If all men count with you, but none too much,
    If you can fill the unforgiving minute
    With sixty seconds' worth of distance run,
    Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
    And--which is more--you'll be a Man, my son!

    I believe this is the best poem ever written because it relates to every single person from every walk of life. I can read it a thousand times over and never get sick of it, my vote for one of the best poems ever written. GG23

  • Karl Wild GG23
    16 years ago

    So very true that most cannot fathom the true meaning of The Raven, and shakespeare goes without saying. But I believe that many poets and readers overlook the ability and the quality of poets who in their eyes just aren't as popular as shakespeare or Poe.

  • debbylyn
    16 years ago

    Pablo Neruda's "I Do Not Love You...."

    The ultimate love poem.....as a matter of fact for love poetry, he can't be beat....not even by Shakespeare.

  • Alex D
    16 years ago

    Idk if it's the best but it is definitley one of my favorites

    SONNET 116 by William Shakespeare
    Let me not to the marriage of true minds
    Admit impediments. Love is not love
    Which alters when it alteration finds,
    Or bends with the remover to remove:
    O no! it is an ever-fixed mark
    That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
    It is the star to every wandering bark,
    Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.
    Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
    Within his bending sickle's compass come:
    Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
    But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
    If this be error and upon me proved,
    I never writ, nor no man ever loved.

  • debbylyn
    16 years ago

    Sonnet 116 is definitely one of my favorites too....but not even in the same league as Neruda!

  • Brittney Follett
    16 years ago

    The Race

    Whenever I start to hang my head in front of failure's face,
    my downward fall is broken by the memory of a race.
    A children's race, young boys, young men; how I remember well,
    excitement sure, but also fear, it wasn't hard to tell.
    They all lined up so full of hope, each thought to win that race
    or tie for first, or if not that, at least take second place.
    Their parents watched from off the side, each cheering for their son,
    and each boy hoped to show his folks that he would be the one.

    The whistle blew and off they flew, like chariots of fire,
    to win, to be the hero there, was each young boy's desire.
    One boy in particular, whose dad was in the crowd,
    was running in the lead and thought "My dad will be so proud"
    But as he speeded down the field and crossed a shallow dip,
    the little boy who thought he'd win, lost his step and slipped.
    Trying hard to catch himself, his arms flew everyplace,
    and midst the laughter of the crowd he fell flat on his face.
    As he fell, his hope fell too; he couldn't win it now.
    Humiliated, he just wished to disappear somehow.

    But as he fell his dad stood up and showed his anxious face,
    which to the boy so clearly said, "Get up and win that race!"
    He quickly rose, no damage done, behind a bit that's all,
    and ran with all his mind and might to make up for his fall.
    So anxious to restore himself, to catch up and to win,
    his mind went faster than his legs. He slipped and fell again.
    He wished that he had quit before with only one disgrace.
    "I'm hopeless as a runner now, I shouldn't try to race."

    But through the laughing crowd he searched and found his father's face
    with a steady look that said again, "Get up and win that race!"
    So he jumped up to try again, ten yards behind the last.
    "If I'm to gain those yards," he thought, "I've got to run real fast!"
    Exceeding everything he had, he regained eight, then ten...
    but trying hard to catch the lead, he slipped and fell again.
    Defeat! He lay there silently. A tear dropped from his eye.
    "There's no sense running anymore! Three strikes I'm out! Why try?
    I've lost, so what's the use?" he thought. "I'll live with my disgrace."
    But then he thought about his dad, who soon he'd have to face.

    "Get up," an echo sounded low, "you haven't lost at all,
    for all you have to do to win is rise each time you fall.
    Get up!" the echo urged him on, "Get up and take your place!
    You were not meant for failure here! Get up and win that race!"
    So, up he rose to run once more, refusing to forfeit,
    and he resolved that win or lose, at least he wouldn't quit.
    So far behind the others now, the most he'd ever been,
    still he gave it all he had and ran like he could win.
    Three times he'd fallen stumbling, three times he rose again.
    Too far behind to hope to win, he still ran to the end.

    They cheered another boy who crossed the line and won first place,
    head high and proud and happy -- no falling, no disgrace.
    But, when the fallen youngster crossed the line, in last place,
    the crowd gave him a greater cheer for finishing the race.
    And even though he came in last with head bowed low, unproud,
    you would have thought he'd won the race, to listen to the crowd.
    And to his dad he sadly said, "I didn't do so well."
    "To me, you won," his father said. "You rose each time you fell."

    And now when things seem dark and bleak and difficult to face,
    the memory of that little boy helps me in my own race.
    For all of life is like that race, with ups and downs and all.
    And all you have to do to win is rise each time you fall.
    And when depression and despair shout loudly in my face,
    another voice within me says, "Get up and win that race!"

    by D. H. Groberg

    ****I really like this poem because ... Well it's amazing and it reminds me of my life...

  • Brittney Follett
    16 years ago

    Er... Bob... I went to go edit my post.. because I wanted to put the title on it... "The Race" ... aaaaaand... it said you edited.. it ... and ... now I can't edit it...

    Spanks :)

  • Karl Wild GG23
    16 years ago

    It's a good poem, but to me it loses interest because he rhymes the same words over and over again. I found after I read a word I knew what the next rhyme would be and I hate poems like that, there just so predictable. Good poem and great meaning but way to repetative for my liking.

    GG23

  • Alex D
    16 years ago

    Just looked up neruda that is an amazing poem

  • Mr M
    16 years ago

    Well, if you want to study the human condition, there is no better way than through Shakespeare but Neruda is running a close second...