Beauty in her tears

~~~~~~~~~~~~closed for judging~~~~~~~~~
only 5 will move onto the next round

~hollywoodxbangbang
~teria
~her cliche life
~synthetic tears run dry
~wings of flames

wow. i never knew it would be that hard to judge, but they were all sooo goood!!!!

~gabriella
XP
poems:

beauty in her tears~hollywoodxbangbang:DONE

screams unheard~synthetic tears run dry....jordan:DONE

sparkles of the night~Teria:DONE

the wind~her cliche life OXO ..... terra:DONE

completely nonexistent~invisiblybroken:DONE

erased~raveena:DONE

broken sorrows~wings of flames:DONE

i will think up the prizes soon! but every enterer gets a comment.
so yup.
thx!!!!!!

Mmkay then nevermind :)

Hmmm.......
it's not like you'll write 3 different parts to the same poem, you will write a different poem for each round you go through.....
so......

Beauty in Her Tears, please. :]

**WOOHOO!!! GO NINGA!!!!**

The Wind Please :-)

haha i love the title. actually i love the wind!!! haha

The Wind (Sedoka)

It quickly goes by,
Swarming up the clouds of dust,
Swallowing up the forest's peace.

Rustling the leaves,
It whistles its friendly tune;
Calming the children's nightmares.

Sparkles of night

Okay!
there's still more entries so keep it coming!
XP
~gabriella

Reserve

complete nonexistance =]

5 slots left!!!!
i am so excited,
the poems already completed are very good!
~gabriella

Can i change complete nonexistence to completely nonexistent??? please =]

Don't worry, that's perfectly fine with me!
i will change it as well.
~gabriella

K.thanx =]

*Completely Nonexistent*
Written by: Michelle

Yes, I'm in this world,
But no, I dont belong.
Everytime I think I do something right,
It turns out to be all wrong.

So I have a story to tell,
That will explain my life to you.
If you dont believe one word of it,
Let me just say its all so very true.

It started when I was young,
I had no cares in the world.
Yes, it was so simple,
Being a little girl.

I was the center of attention,
Always was adored.
My parents said they loved me,
And they'd get me anything they could afford.

Then came my teenage years,
At first it was smooth, not rough.
But then i turned 15 years old,
And everything got so tough.

Falling in love became a habit,
One that i couldnt break.
Sometimes I'd get so frustrated,
It was all I could possibly take.

But thats just one problem,
I have plenty more.
My parents arent the same as 10 years ago,
I'm no longer the child they adore.

Yes, I'm really hurt,
Because they shut me out of their life.
Its no longer mother/father daughter chats,
If I want one I have to strife.

But no thats not the end,
I have another problem in mind.
I use to have friendship,
But thats no longer what i find.

Now I find screaming and fighting,
Yes, its causing so much pain.
So you can probably guess,
That its driving me insane.

So I came to a conclusion,
One that will fix it all.
I'll stay out of peoples lives,
So I wont be in the way and trip and fall.

I'll keep to myself,
I wont be a hazard to this place.
You will all be happy,
While I'll be hiding my face.

So invisible is what I am,
Invisible is what I will always be.
Being completely nonexistent,
Will be best for you and for me.

Wow, these are all very good.
but i need more to judge!!!!
come on people!!!
XP

Sparkles Of The Night.

As his voice echos on the phone,
and night butterflies fly across the ground,
I lay upon the cemented side walk,
with chalk writing all about.
And, listen to the beauty
connecting through just wired lines.
I stare upon the darkest night,
and count the starts that shine so bright.
Drifting up ahead lies the brightest,
surrounded by a million sparkles of the night,
just as my love surrounded
by his own beauty.

- - -
Not my best.. :/
But, hey it's done.

RESERVE LONELINESS IS HAPPINESS

There you go!
XD

Broken sorrows

My new poem is down there VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV

I really dont like my poem...i think its the worst thing ive ever written. I'll probably edited and if so it'll be done tomorrow

Anyone else?
^.^

Broken Sorrow

In the midst of destruction,
The world turns to cold,
In all of each motion,
The cards go to flod,

You turn your back to me,
And lie me on the pews,
Push me to the nothing,
But it all comes down to you,

The flowers die in darkness,
Sunshine turns to cloud,
Bow to the music,
Live to be so proud,

Somebody won't love you,
Just the way I did,
Someone will give up,
On life we were rid,

They won't care the same,
Or have the heart to disguise,
What once was and will be,
Just a life full of lies.

Ummm....
well i'd really like them to get in as soon as possible.

XP
but thankyou for what is already posted!

Mkay
there are still two poems not taken yet, so if the two reserved that are not finished yet get finished before those two get taken, then i will just start judging from there.
^i hope that makes sense
thx, gabriella

^thx for reminding me.....
lol.
yes, i'm going to PM the ppl who haven't finished their poems yet, and i've decided the deadline to be friday, the 10th.
^.^

Beauty in Her Tears

She sits alone and dreams of airplanes and boats,
With his fingerprints engraved onto her throat,
And her shattered heart beats through the debris,
As she looks through her battered eyes to me.

"I know what you`re going to say, the answer is no,"
She says as she lowers her head and turns to go,
Lacking all the courage and fearing the next fight;
She runs back into his iron-clad arms tonight.

And I just wish that I could get her too see,
What her bruises and anguish are doing to me,
So afraid of loneliness, she needs to feel something;
And the yelling and punching is better than nothing.

How he can find beauty in her tears, nobody knows,
But on her body, the affects of alcohol clearly shows;
And she wants to get away on the next early flight;
But without his voice, she doesn`t feel right.

So I watch her walk away with a big fake grin,
Wearing a jacket and sunglasses to hide her skin;
She`s ashamed of who she`s become, it`s easy to see,
But yet my Sister turns to him instead of to me.

-Jenna Elphick
August 6, 2007

So if the last person doesn't finish their poem by the 10th, i will start judging then.
thanks everybody!

RESULTS HAVE BEEN POSTED!!!!
it's at the top btw.
congrats to all who have moved into the next round, all the poems were so beautiful it was so very hard to judge them.