Anything you want.

Look, I'm really getting sick of this " your poem is amazing" leave it at that stuff.
I want honest critque.
I'm not at my best, I know I'm not and I want to be. I have great dreams as a writer, and I can't improve if I don't know how or what to improve.

Would someone please comment a few of my newer poems, and let me know what is wrong.
I will gladly return any favors, at all.
Just name the poems, do a few of mine.. And, that's that.

As many as you want me to do.

Unless, of course it's one liners.
If you like it or hate it, tell me WHY.
Don't say " i like it" or " i hate it" and leave it at that.
PLEASE.
AND THANK YOU.

Ok im in;
i RRC three of your poems;
-Hard as nails
-Baby, dont make me cry
-Requiem for redemption ( which was by far my fav) lol

i commented honestly and gave my reasons why.
please could you do the same to some of my poems.
thanks
xxx

Ok i did ..

*hard as nails
*requiem for redemption
*i' gonna make it through [[number two]]

will u do..

* i cried so many tears
*why cant she find the right guy
* i will always love you

thanx

Ok I did Hard as Nails

Can you please do

Secrets