Read mine & I read yours

Hey,
I wrote a new poem called
"A Flow Of Death"
and I would really appreciate it if any of you will please read&comment&rate.
I wrote it about a book I had read, a book about loving someone even after death. Please read it carefully, I did write a bit differently, trying to twist my words a tad bit more than usual. I hope you can feel the emotion I felt, please read!!

P.S.-
If you leave a comment, I promise to read any you ask me to read, if not asked, I'll still read a poem of yours, maybe even more.
Thanks so much!!

I read it, and commented, I would like you to read Wheres God. Thanks,

Thanks so much,
I read two of your poems, you are fantastic!

Read them, great job!
you're fantastic!

Please do my new ones

Commented and VOTED. I would like you to comment and VOTE my latest poem called sex is a boon

Done.
please do mine..
* borrowed time
* don't let me fall
any of this poem will do. thanx

I commented and voted! :)

Any poem of mine would be greatly appreciated.

[Although 99 percent are 3 years or older, I'd still like some feedback -- and no harsh criticism, i was young ;) haha.]