I'll give honest comments

I'll read up to three of your poems and give you honest feedback on them. I'd appreciate it if you would comment on some of mine, especially my newest "Winds of Change", but you don't have to. Thanks:)

I'll do it..Can you please do

Going To be Too Late??

Please And Thank You

Could you do this boy
his forgotte birthday
thanks

A Lifeless Portrait
Raging Flesh
Distilled Desire

Thanks. :)

Anyone else?

Me...He is My Kind Of Rain Please
I'll return favor
Thanks

I only have a few poems, and i would appreciate honest comments/criticism on any of them, my favorites are "just a toy" and "Forever and Always" so please, review those two among your choices if you will..

~chris

Done, I like your poem very much.
Can you do:
1. Untitled
2. Heaven or hell
3. Too lost to be found
Thanks!

*daddy please accept me
*crimson red
*i try to forget

thanx and i'll do some of yours.

Anyone else?

Can you do:

'Save The World'

'December Rain'

and

'Disturbed'

thanks. I'll go check out ur poem

I commented on two of yours poems.

Can you please do:

"Did you ((Song)),,*"
"My Prince Charming,,*"
And "Me,,*"

Thank you.

I'll Do your newest.
Could you please do.

` A shower of pleasure
and
`The Moon temptress

Thanks,
Elaine.

Anyone else?

Yes =D
Can you do any of the newer ones?
Im trying to improve my work but the only way to do so is to know what I can do better. It will help a whole lot.

I will do the same for you =]

Hmmmmm
can you plz do "the boy who said goodby", "as i say goodby to this world i call hell", and "i hate that youv changed me"
thanks i will retern the favor =]

Could you please do :

- Secret dreams
- In need of help
- Breaking Away

thank you xx

I'm going to go and do your's now could you please do:

1) The power of love
2) The final day
3) The egals flight

Thanks guys and gals, anyone else?

Yah hey i will go check out yours and you can go check out mine...thanks always Manda

i think i did three or four

I did winds of change.. Would you please read :
-marsha (double acrostic)
-alvina marsha (acrostic)
That's all.. Thx.. :)

Song of love
die
love that never see
thnx..............pls

Three words

So close but yet. so far away

A part of me you never knew.

plzzz I just started this and I would like some honest comments so, I can know if I actually have the talent for this. And votes would be nice too.

-The Modest Rose
-Wishing Star [Triquatrain]

Thanks :]

marcella

Any of mine of you gotta any chance, Thanks!

Could you please do my poems?

Control
The storm within
love me for me

I'll do some of yours now.

Thanks!