Comment on just 2

  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Hey can you comment on my two well its one poem split into two parts a third will be added later but i wanted some views now

    comment my two and leave 2 or 3 names of yours and ill return the favour :)

  • Rose not your average
    18 years ago

    His forgotten birthday
    no such thing as the perfect world
    this boy

  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Done

  • Catastrophic Beauty
    18 years ago

    I commented on four of yours.

    Can you please comment on.

    "Did you ((Song)),,*"

    "My Prince Charming,,*"

    "Me,,*"

  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    I done those and i think your a very good writer :)

  • ECILA ice
    18 years ago

    Since i have nothing to do i read an extra poem, but i'm done with your two poems. kindly check on my poem..
    *nobody's perfect
    *dreamer

    can u please vote and comment on it?? thanx

  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Doneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :)

  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Lol you did the wrong two

  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    No more thanks :)

  • Adelle
    18 years ago

    Ok well I dident see your last message untill after I had read them voted and commented if you dont want to do mine dont worry but if you do can you do

    1) The power of love
    2) The final day