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  • Letty
    18 years ago

    Could you please do Love me for me?

    Thanks!

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  • the come back
    18 years ago

    Mine please..all of my poem...love that never see,die,insane,song of love,wish of mine,friends or lovers?song of love

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Done letty

    and tazly i said one per person and ive already done one of yours

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  • the come back
    18 years ago

    Please can you do it??nid to improve plz.........

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Then ask someone else mate i wanted to get a feel for everyones work im not doing everything you write because i wouldnt expect that in return ask someone else!

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  • the come back
    18 years ago

    Amyways thanks for your time...god bless...^_^

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Anyone else?

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Lmfao bash the hell out of it? ok then ill pick at everything i can lol although this is a weird request :)

    done that now mate :)

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Anyone else ?

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Lol do you want me to 'the story' then? ill do one more but not tazlys amount lol

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    A cuplet is

    two lines
    that rhyme

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  • Stephanie Naylor
    18 years ago

    Could you please do

    **on a date with death

    please and thankyou

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Lol fair enough then but yeah i thought it was good just if its gonna be that short then make it even cuplets unless its like oduble the length :)

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Hey stephannie i would read your work but i just read the first stanza and realised id read it before lol and i checked and on page 2 id even commented too :)

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  • Tricky Daze
    18 years ago

    ''Can't Stand It'',please

    It's so sweet of you

    Thanks,
    Laura

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Done tricky daze and thanks i am sweet arent i lol :P

    lol stalking thats just kinda scarey!

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Lol yeah it is abit funny i do wonder why you wanted me to comment on your work after all you had over 40 people comment already surely you've got all the advice you need?

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    No stephannie you silly!

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  • Tricky Daze
    18 years ago

    Yes you are in any way james :]]

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    You scare me!

    your not 15 no one that confident and that would be

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  • shade127
    18 years ago

    New to the site...looking for citique on my only one posted poem titled-You're special. thanks

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    A newbie ooo lol yea il take a look now

    done!!

    i just realised this free comment page has been open like 3days and ive only had 30people :S

    anyone else?

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    No one?

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Ok no more titles to be left :)

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  • DeadandBleeding
    18 years ago

    Can you read The Mask plz....?

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  • Hatori
    18 years ago

    Drat!! I missed out x.x

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  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Lol ok ill do you two as im nice like that lol but no body else!! maybe its an idea i edit the first post!

    done deadandbleeding

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