New to the site, need critique

  • shade127
    18 years ago

    Hello everyone-
    I just recently joined P&Q. I've posted my first poem but I just wanted to get some feedback on my first post.

    thanks to all that comment.

    PEACE AND BLESSINGS
    ~Shade127

  • shade127
    18 years ago

    OK SO I"VE POSTED THREE MORE...please comment and critique. I will do the same for however many you want.

  • Cella Bella
    18 years ago

    I read and commented your lastest two.

    Could you read,

    -Wishing Star [Triquatrain]
    -To Live And Never

    Thanks

    marcella

  • Marc Ortiz
    18 years ago

    I did your two poems..
    Could you please read.

    The Missing Piece of my Heart
    Together as One

    *Please vote too - I voted.*

  • shade127
    18 years ago

    Commented and voted on your poems. WONDERFUL job on them! Thanks for the feedback on mines as well ;)