New to the site, need critique

Hello everyone-
I just recently joined P&Q. I've posted my first poem but I just wanted to get some feedback on my first post.

thanks to all that comment.

PEACE AND BLESSINGS
~Shade127

OK SO I"VE POSTED THREE MORE...please comment and critique. I will do the same for however many you want.

I read and commented your lastest two.

Could you read,

-Wishing Star [Triquatrain]
-To Live And Never

Thanks

marcella

I did your two poems..
Could you please read.

The Missing Piece of my Heart
Together as One

*Please vote too - I voted.*

Commented and voted on your poems. WONDERFUL job on them! Thanks for the feedback on mines as well ;)