New poem. will comment back.

  • jenna grace
    18 years ago

    I;;ve been working on it for a while.
    r.r.c.
    i;;ll do the same for yours.
    thanks in advance.

  • Michelle18
    18 years ago

    Done...can you do...

    *i have to move on

    thanx

  • Lonely Little Dreamer
    18 years ago

    Ok commented and rated your poem

    Could you please do either or both if you wish:

    Facets of Rain
    Unattainable Love