QUICK Contest.

This contest will end...when I feel like it! But you won't have weeks and weeks and weeks. If you reserve a spot, I expect you to submit your poem withing three days. I don't expect this contest to last more than three days anyway.

So.

THE TOPIC:
Hate. Be creative. All categories of poem are allowed. Explicit, nature, everything.

THE TITLES:
Create your own.

Doesn't have to rhyme, but it MUST FLOW EXTREMELY WELL, or be purposefully and artfully arranged in a choppy manner. I LIKE FLOW AND JUDGE IT HARSHLY.

Hmm, I`ll reserve. :]

I hope this is ok. i know its angry but it's a good hate poem. i was really angry when i wrote this. anyways hope it is ok

Anger and betrayal

by Nikki

Anger, rage, dismay, betrayal,
his life is looking rather frail,
to take it away would be a breeze,
yet i can't afford the legal fee's,

you damned i hate you- i hope you burn,
you stupid prick i hope you learn,
fuck you I'll kill you- your not my friend,
you've torn my heart- for that you'll end,

fury burning with passion of sun,
die you bastard - you were my only one,
will my love for you forever endure,
i don't think it can ever stay honest and pure...

Her Broken Heart Never Tasted so Tart

tears fill the hands
heart torn in two
love once engraved in bands
you'll never find one so blue

nights cradling sobbing cries
drowning sorrow and pains with tasteless wine
formally known as her winning prize
dazed and confused, there were no signs

anger hits her plate
emotions a delicious feast to pick from
since when has this become her awful fate
only one words crosses her eyes, what a dirty scum

the perfect couple they were called
their passionate fire never to die
she can't help herself but be appalled
i guess this is my final goodbye

What if it were me

I look around this world
greed is all I see
materialistic people
not focusing on the need.
What happened to the love
for our fellow man?
this world is so selfish
it's hard to understand.
What if it were you
living in the street
with people walking by
spitting at your feet?
Would you feel differently
if you were hungry and cold
forgotten by the world
left to die alone?
I'll end this with a challenge
when you see someone in need
I beg you to ask yourself
what if it were me.

Not sure this is really a "hate" poem. Although I truly believe some people hate people reaching out and asking for help.

Hooray! Thanks, everyone. So, because people are posting, I'll cut the spots and there's no limit any more to the number of people that can enter.

PRIZES: I haven't decided yet, usually I only do one winner for 20 r/r/c and maybe a couple honorable mentions for comments on poems that really interest me.

Confined

I want to be who I want to be
No more pressure, no more torture
I don't understand why I can't be me
Let me walk in my own two shoes
Even if I fall, I don't want any help from you

I know that life is never really fair
But living with you is more than I can bare

I was born confined but left to break loose
Became more alive, became less confused
I washed my life clean and start anew
I want to be me, I don't want to be you

And I'm tired of not ever doing it perfectly
I'm never correct, I always have to start fresh
I don't know what it is you want from me
The standards you hold are just way to high
If you don't stop choking me I'm afraid that I'll die

Take it or leave it, this is all I have to give
This is who I am, so just let me live

I was born confined but left to break loose
Became more alive, became less confused
I know who I am and I know for sure
I am my own and I am not yours

And I don't know I may make some of my own mistakes too
But I know the mistakes I make won't be made because of you.

Xx Hate xX

I can't believe I hate someone so much
And guess what that someone is you
I recoil at the thought of being in your clutch
You're some sort of wretched taboo!

Cos I honestly wish you'd just disappear
To where I could never see you again
I'd give out an enormous cheer
And crack open expensive champagne

You always have to get one over me
"Anything you do I can outshine"
Well I'm afraid I will have to disagree
Cos you get your kicks by taking what's mine

I despise you right down to into my core
Everything 'bout you makes me feel unclean
You're just another little blonde wh**e
A boyfriend stealing machine

I'm not the only one who feels like this
You've pissed off everyone all on your own
Cos we all just wish you just didn't exist
So take the hint and leave us alone

I never knew I could feel this way
I could feel the emotion that's 'hate' so strong
It's weighing me down most every day
Yet surprisingly it doesn't feel wrong

*Gem*
Copyright©GemmaStott2007

I will picture my dreams
every day
I will never give up
Till I see my dreams realized
The power of desire
will keep me awake
Will oil my lamp
It will never burn out
I will win the battle in my mind
In my soul
And will move forward
To earn the prize
I will live my dream
It is almost near
I will live this dream
Over and over again

Okay, thanks everyone. Judging will take place tonight, sorry for the long wait, I got tied up in other matters.

Okay, maybe not tonight. >_< So sorry, have other things I need to take care of.

Have you forgotten about us?

Oh my god. i'm so sorry guys, my life's just been absolutely crazy lately. and again i dont have time to do anything tonight. i'm going through a bad break up and im loaded with homework among other things. thanks for the pms, i WILL judge as soone as i can!

Forever Changed

You were always my favorite uncle
the one I loved & trusted too
I never imagined the day would come
when everything within me would hate you.
I was only twelve years old
laying on the floor watching t.v.
no one else was at your house
no one else but you & me.
Why did you look at me like that?
When you saw me, didn't you see a little girl?
Didn't you see the fear in my eyes
as you forever changed my innocent world?
As you raped me over & over again
for four very long years
did it bother you even once
when you saw my eyes fill with tears?
It seemed like an eternity
I didn't think it would ever stop
but after I turned sixteen
I decided it had to... no matter what.
I knew I couldn't stand it
to happen even once more
so the last time I was in your car
I waited till the time was right & jumped out of the door.
I really didn't care if I died
laying there on the back road
It's the only thing I knew to do
Cause this secret couldn't be told.
No such luck, I was still alive
scuffed & bruised with pains in my chest
I took off running for my life
But now I was scared to death.
I heard the car stop on the rocks
as I ran through the cornfield fast
wondering if I'd make it through this day
or would it be my last?
I could hear you running after me
as the corn behind me moved
suddenly something grabbed me
it was my greatest fear... you.
I don't remember anything else
except the look in your eyes
You seemed to be totally insane
that look you couldn't disguise.
Lord only knows what happened after that
It's like hitting a stone wall
my mind has totally blocked it out
I'm not yet willing to recall.
I don't even know how I got home that day
but one thing I know for sure
that was the last time you ever touched me
I thank God, it never happened any more.

I thought I would try one that really was about hate.

A Young Killers Mind

Dark, and Cold.
Your blood on the floor.
The knife in my hand,
As I stand at the door.

I reach for the towel,
To wipe off my face.
We have to get out of here,
Far away from this place.

Your eyes still open,
Staring deep into my soul.
Your breathing slowing down now,
This is way out of control.

We've always just laid there,
While you beat us down.
No one ever believed us,
Not in this little town.

We fought back this time,
Much to your surprise.
We showed you how it feels,
With the horror in your eyes.

Stabbed you once,
Then Stabbed you twice.
Right through your heart,
That my father is the price.

To hurt us all,
And make us cry.
Your own children,
Now we say Good Bye.

I grabbed the knife,
From Lilly's hand.
They'll never believe,
This wasn't planned.

She's only nine,
Yet killed you with ease.
Then stabbed you again,
As you fell to your knees.

You never saw it coming,
As she ran from behind.
The knife in her hand,
A young killers mind.

She was protecting us,
That's what I'll say.
Cause it's the truth,
It happened that way.

The bruises will show,
The truth that we speak.
On all five of us,
Just from this week.

She showed him how,
The five of us feel.
The inside of our hearts,
Which shall never heal.

Does this have to be a new poem?

Lol... here I go!
________

F*ck You
by Kristi H.

You say you're pretty,
And I agree...
(Pretty... ugly)
Nanana

You put your hair up,
In a bun,
And say you're s.e.x.y.
(You're just that stupid)

You won't shut up,
So just go f*ck,
Yourself.
(I hate you that bad)

I hate the way you,
Joke around,
Cause it ain't funny.
(Yeah, what now?)

Go complain,
About your butt,
And leave us alone.
(Will you just SCREW off??)

Cause no one wants,
You here, Ms. Bossy...
Just go away!
(F*ck you, leave us a-lone!)

You're a ton of,
Smelly sh*t,
That no one needs.
(Someone cut the cheese here?)

You think you're cute,
And they all say,
You're born that way.
(Yeah, right, b*tch...!)

Go take your makeup,
That's from the mall,
And throw it straight,
Into the wall.

Cause you ain't worth it
(Ain't worth it)
And I don't care
(Fuck you, b*tch)

Don't matter what you wear,
You still are ugly...
In your own,
Filthy, d-ir-ty, non-innocente way...

Maybe someday,
You'll wake up,
To find the world,
Just ain't your stage.

You know, your singing,
Really sucks!
(And for the sh*t you give me)
Take it and leave!
(Yeahh... take it and LEAVE!!!)

Cause I ain't asking,
For you masking,
Within a masquerade
In some f*cking ugly place!

Cause you ain't worth it,
(Ain't worth it)
And I don't care,
(F*ck you, bitch)

Your nasty habit,
Just ain't too fair

Cause you ain't worth it!
(Ain't worth it)
And I don't care.
(F*ck you, bitch)
I'll just pretend that,
You're not there!

To you and all of your pretty (ugly) friends, b*tch...

For forcing people into things...

For hurting those who are different...

F*ck you.

I don't know if this contest is still on but I'll post a poem anyways...

Goodbye She Wrote

Do you believe in love?
She looked the sky as she wrote
Do you believe in me?
The song of sadness formed a sea

Do you remember us?
Pictures of heavenly days forever engraved
Do you remember me?
Words in a treasure chest forever encased

Goodbye she wrote
While her heart slowly broke
Goodbye she wrote
Wrote the thoughts she never spoke

Twisted thoughts of painful memories she had
To put to an end with a bullet and her pen
Rid herself of the damage that was said
And untwist the dagger that laid in her chest

Heart in hand, alone she wrote
While her tears beagn to flow
Covered in darkness to hide her glow
She pulled the trigger...

Goodbye she wrote
To the wind she softly spoke
Goodbye she wrote
Love vanished with the smoke

Covered in darkness she hid her dim glow
As he walked in the room and a tear began to flow
He picked up the note as the wind began to blow
And read the words that froze to snow

Dear keeper of my heart and my soul,
Remember those days of yellow and gold?
The same days of love and passion, of which you told
Of how you blinded with clever lies and adventures untold?
That dragged me to darkness as I lost my soul

Remember what followed? The words, the beatings, the scolds?
That caused the sadness that made me so cold
Remember the pain you caused? Left in me to decay, to rot, and into cuts mold?
Well now I plan to repay you, repay you in ten-fold

There's just one more thing I want you to know
One thing to remember before you go
We could have been together, forever, we could have grown
But now it's time for you to go... time for you to be buried in snow

Goodbye

Sincerely,
The bitter memory of you I'll hold

She looked at him one last time...
Pulled the trigger to end her note
And with a bullet goodbye she wrote

Is this over yet?

I don't know if this is over yet, or if my poem even counts, but I'm gonna post it anyway.

Forget

by Beyond Repair

Never forget my name, I want to burn it into you soul
I want to read it in your veins, I want you to ache at the sight
Of everything and anything cause it reminds you of me
I want to burn me into your eyes so I'm all that you see

I want every part of your brain to be soak in my memory
I want your every thought to first begin with me
I want every other word out of your god damn mouth
Have something to do with me and not what your talking about

Forget everything you ever knew
Forget everything you once held true
Forget everything that meant something to you
And fill your every tissue every fiber with my being
I want you to know what I am feeling

This may be a shock to your senses
But this is what I have to put up with
This is a taste of what you put me through
All the things you have no idea that you do

I wish you knew half, of the spells that you cast
Every shadow has your shape
Every food has your taste
You are my everything and there's no escape
I just wish you could share the same fate

Thanks ~Zach

Lol ... Edit - Just noticed it has finished! Darnnit, I had the perfect poem for this!