Priestess All Dressed In Night: Dark Magic

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    I would really really really appreciate it if you would read and comment my poem. However, I really really don't want a one liner. I am really looking to improve and would love some honest feedback. So I will double your comment if you give me a good comment about how it reads to you and if you think there is anything I could do to make it better. If you just give me a one liner, I'll debate even commenting back. Please please please take the time to read it and THINK about it. Thank you so much. Without you guys all my poetry is words on a screen.

    Title: Priestss All Dressed In Night: Dark Magic.

    I really appreciate this guys. Thank you..

    Just leave the titles you want me to look at and I'll be sure to get back to ASAP. Expect honest critique however. Thanks yet again for all of you who read and comment. It means a lot ^^

    .:Danielle:.

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    No problem. I'll get on it right away. Thank you very much ^^

    .:Danielle:.

  • Sherry Lynn
    18 years ago

    ;) Got it...

    Will you please r/r/c on A Medics Creed
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=940941

    Thanks hun.

    --Sher

  • Lonely Little Dreamer
    18 years ago

    Well you know I read you stuff anyways and you read mine..so I am just stopping by..to say hi

    HELLO DANIELLE!

    I wuffles you! *muah muah*

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Awww.. I loves you too Amy!!! *Mwah Mwah* hehe. Of course we do, you get a sneak peek of them before anyone else, feel special. hehe.

    I'll get right on it Sherry. Thank you so much!! It means so much that you guys take the time to read it. ^^

    .:Danielle:.

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Anyone else? Come on guys, please??

    .:Danielle:.

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    It's not a bad poem guys, come on, please?

    .:Danielle:.

  • Crystal Gaze
    18 years ago

    Done. ANd Much Enjoyed.

    Could You please do...

    `The Dawn Of Love.

    and

    ` The Tear's Behind The Memory.

    Thanks,
    Elaine.

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Of course I'll get right on those. Thanks so much ^^

    .:Danielle:.

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    There we go. All done. Anyone else?

    .:Danielle:.

  • Cella Bella
    18 years ago

    Done. Great work!

    Could you do,

    -A Nightmare's Song
    -Wishing Star [Triquatrain]

    thank you

    marcella

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Okay I'll get to them right away. Thank you guys SOO much for the comments. I appreciate them sooo much. ^_^

    Love ya!
    .:Danielle:.

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Come on guys... please and thank you?

    .:danielle:.

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Ok, I really need serious readers on this one. PLEASE! I'll beg.. lol

    .:Danielle:.