xPerfect Chaosx
18 years ago
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I would really really really appreciate it if you would read and comment my poem. However, I really really don't want a one liner. I am really looking to improve and would love some honest feedback. So I will double your comment if you give me a good comment about how it reads to you and if you think there is anything I could do to make it better. If you just give me a one liner, I'll debate even commenting back. Please please please take the time to read it and THINK about it. Thank you so much. Without you guys all my poetry is words on a screen. |
xPerfect Chaosx
18 years ago
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No problem. I'll get on it right away. Thank you very much ^^ |
Sherry Lynn
18 years ago
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;) Got it... |
Lonely Little Dreamer
18 years ago
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Well you know I read you stuff anyways and you read mine..so I am just stopping by..to say hi |
xPerfect Chaosx
18 years ago
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Awww.. I loves you too Amy!!! *Mwah Mwah* hehe. Of course we do, you get a sneak peek of them before anyone else, feel special. hehe. |
xPerfect Chaosx
18 years ago
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Anyone else? Come on guys, please?? |
xPerfect Chaosx
18 years ago
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It's not a bad poem guys, come on, please? |
Crystal Gaze
18 years ago
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Done. ANd Much Enjoyed. |
xPerfect Chaosx
18 years ago
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Of course I'll get right on those. Thanks so much ^^ |
xPerfect Chaosx
18 years ago
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There we go. All done. Anyone else? |
Cella Bella
18 years ago
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Done. Great work! |
xPerfect Chaosx
18 years ago
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Okay I'll get to them right away. Thank you guys SOO much for the comments. I appreciate them sooo much. ^_^ |
xPerfect Chaosx
18 years ago
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Come on guys... please and thank you? |
xPerfect Chaosx
18 years ago
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Ok, I really need serious readers on this one. PLEASE! I'll beg.. lol |