Trying to improve my poetry

  • Pesamenteiro
    18 years ago

    I really want to improve my poetry, please r/r/c any of my poems and I'll double the amount you did.
    ~Thanks~

  • Sherry Lynn
    18 years ago

    I got two of yours will you please read my newest three and Medics Creed

    Thanks

    --Sher

  • Crystal Gaze
    18 years ago

    I only had time for one...

    So for now could you please do...

    ` The Dawn Of love.
    and

    ` The Tear's Behind The Memory

    Thanks,
    Elaine.

  • nikki
    18 years ago

    Ok i did untitled, and different eyes

    could you please do

    - my sweet rose(acrostic)
    - the pain you gave me over three years
    - depression is not for attention
    - in these arms.

    hope you can do the and thanks

  • Veamm
    18 years ago

    I enjoyed reading your piece and i did 3 of yours..so bye best wishes

  • Pesamenteiro
    18 years ago

    Anyone else.