Trying to improve my poetry

I really want to improve my poetry, please r/r/c any of my poems and I'll double the amount you did.
~Thanks~

I got two of yours will you please read my newest three and Medics Creed

Thanks

--Sher

I only had time for one...

So for now could you please do...

` The Dawn Of love.
and

` The Tear's Behind The Memory

Thanks,
Elaine.

Ok i did untitled, and different eyes

could you please do

- my sweet rose(acrostic)
- the pain you gave me over three years
- depression is not for attention
- in these arms.

hope you can do the and thanks

I enjoyed reading your piece and i did 3 of yours..so bye best wishes

Anyone else.