Me for you

Ok so here's the deal
i would like some of my poems critiqued, choose which ever you like
and in return i will critique yours :)
just post here which ones you want me to look at and i will
have fun and i hope to hear from you soon

Alright, I'm up for that deal.
Though, the one I really want critiqued is called Sick Of Me - because I tried something so different...So out of my own range of usual thought, that I'm not sure my original idea is going to turn out for the better yet. So, if you could tell me - and be at your harshest - what you think, that would be more than appreciated... If you don't quite understand it, or do not feel up to unraveling all of it, just pick whatever one you want. Alot of my newer ones are just thoughts and words that rushed onto paper - my older ones are more rhyme schemed and thought out.
Whatever you prefer really, a good critical comment is always worth the wait :)