For those who are in LOVe poems.. plzzzz

Well the thing is that my gf asked me to write a new poem for her and this poem is what i got out with so please just check it out and tell me what u think i mean is it good enough to tell her that i really love her..
thxxxx alot.

oh right... its called "late at night"

Hey, I R/R/C on "Late At Night"...It was really good..Could you please do my lastest poem,

Always And Forever [Acoustic]

Please and Thank You!