OCD poem

Hey I just finished up a poem about my disorder and I would like for you guys to check it out. If you want I can read, comment, and rate some of your poems BUT be sure to do the same for me. Also know that you may not get a comment coated in sugar. If I don't like it I'm sorry I'll say why, usually it's because of my personal style.
It's called Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. Enjoy!

;) k sweetie... Will you please r/r/c

1. Medics Creed

Thanks Babe

--Sher

Thank you. I'll be sure to read your poem. I really enjoyed your comment. It was very sweet, and intelligent.

I read yours!! It was really good I just love the way it was planned out ^^ xxx

Oh lord, I just realized I made so many mistakes -.- Im pathetic lol sorry about that sweetie xxx

Done!

please do "Fake god"

thanks!

ExoticTear what mistakes are we talking about? And thanks you guys for checking it out. :)