ACROSTIC SONNET: you comment, i comment. i promise.

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    18 years ago

    If you, any of you, could comment on "lover's sonnet" which is an acrostic sonnet, you can PM me with up to three of your poems for me to comment on. [just tell me youve commented, dont just leave titles.] it was a tricky one for me to write and i just wanted a little feedback.

    HONEST COMMENTS, PLEASE!!!
    thanks.
    -ashes.

  • Pete
    18 years ago

    R/R/C on it - thought it was wonderful. Very nice work.

  • KaKaSHi
    18 years ago

    Done...i pm u too...=D
    awesome poem...that must have been tough to write..=]

  • Stephanie
    18 years ago

    Sure. I'll do it. :P