Godlike title contest O.o [round 1]

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    CLOSED.

    Hi again! I noticed that u are big fans of titled contest so i decided to make one as well, but with many titles.

    RULES:
    -max 2 poems per person
    -the poem must be NEW
    -the poem must RHYME
    -u can also use fixed forms or forms invented by yourself

    I will choose half of the poets that posted poems to move to the 2nd round. If the titles i have given are all taken and u want some more, I'll post some new ones. So don't worry, there's enough place for everyone..

    TITLES:

    Servant of the bones [RESERVED - Simple Sensation]
    Queen of the damned [DONE - NyellMoonlight]
    Blood and gold - RESERVED - The Queen of Spades]
    Never will I break [DONE - xXx SeCrEt WiSh xXx]
    Every time we live together we die a bit more
    Fade to black [DONE - Beautiful Chaos]
    Neverland [DONE- Wings Of Flames]
    Chalice of agony [DONE - SlaveToTheMusic]
    Tears don't fall [RESERVED - Finalgravedigger]
    Fecade of reality
    The phantom agony [RESERVED - Simple Sensation]
    The world is not enough [DONE - NyellMoonlight]
    Cold day in hell
    Where the wild roses grow [RESERVED - HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG]
    Entwined
    Fragments of faith [DONE - Britt]
    When a dead man walks [DONE - 20sMiLe07]
    Trapped in the wake of a dream [DONE- Britt]
    Never purify
    Create the infinite
    Bittersweet Feast [RESERVED - The Queen of Spades]
    Forever yours
    Two for tragedy [DONE - Beautiful Chaos]
    White night fantasy [DONE - xTheEcstasyofSuicidex]
    Blood canticle [DONE - My Decadent]
    The man who sold the world [DONE - xTheEcstasyofSuicidex]
    As the shadows dance [DONE - ReproducedByIntelligence]
    Sweet art thou [RESERVED - My Decadent]
    Pale enchantress [DONE - Decay In The Dark]
    Angel of destiny [RESERVED - Raevyan]
    Never-ending story [DONE - Decay In The Dark]
    Pearls of light [RESERVED - Gem]
    Never tear us apart
    Twist in my sobriety [RESERVED - HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG]
    Always will be

    Have fun!

  • Simple Sensation
    17 years ago

    Can i reserve;

    - Servant of the bones
    - The phantom agony

    Please and thank you.

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Queen of the damned
    The world is not enough

    Great titles!!! :)

  • My Decadent
    17 years ago

    "Sweet Art Thou" and "Blood Canticle" please.
    Thank you.

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    I took the permission of reserving Angel of Destiny for a friend of mine who has some problems with his new made account. And he really wanted that title. If he won't be able to log in in a couple of days,the title will be unreserved. Thanks for your understanding.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Mmm. Excellent titles.
    I'll try: White Night Fantasy and The Man Who Sold the World.

    Thanks! ^^

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Damn you Britt. i wanted trapped in the wake of a dream. hmmm. reserve me never will i break, please!

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Fade to Black & Two For Tragedy please

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Where the Wild Roses Grow
    and
    Twist in my Sobriety

  • My Decadent
    17 years ago

    Blood Canticle
    By My Decadent

    A black wind took you away that night,
    And my inside started changing
    As I stranded away from divine light -
    Another angel to a demon fading.

    *

    As the days darken around me, and the years
    Veil my life with their burden of gloom,
    Trying to hide emotions, but can't hold back tears
    I just stand here weeping at your tomb.

    Mutilated pain pierces through my heart
    As your memory is still carved within me;
    There's no more light to end this endless dark -
    I feel drowned into cold obscurity.

    **

    Rememberance of days in which we were together
    Resuscitates my nubming heart for a moment;
    I think back to when we said "love forever"
    As I slowly drift away in my lament.

    I swore for revenge and spit in Death's face;
    Threatened he will pay with his own black blood
    For taking you away from my tight embrace
    And staining my inside with hatred and mud.

    *

    A black wind took you away that night,
    And my inside bled with excruciating pain;
    And I slid into the darkness of blight
    Singing a blood canticle under numbing rain...

    Forever love,
    Your Decadent.

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Fade To Black

    Do you see these tears of blood,
    That rage from deep inside?
    Slowly pouring from my heart,
    Where hollow dreams collide.

    Do you hear the vanquished cries,
    That leave these sorrowed lips?
    Echoing through empty night,
    As life falls through my grips.

    Do you taste the bitter fruit,
    That grows within my soul?
    Feeding all that's left of me,
    Surrendered its control.

    Can you touch that tender spot,
    That once you tried to slay?
    Free me from this lonely prison,
    You left me in that day.

    Will you bring the sun to shine,
    Before I fade to black?
    Hold me in those tender arms,
    Never looking back.

  • mier
    17 years ago

    Never-ending story
    Pale enchantress

    Thanx.

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Can i have 'When a dead man walks' please :D

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    I am so glad this contest is already populated and that you like the titles i selected. I only hope all of you, and the ones that will be coming will post their poems as soon as possible, without me being obligated to extent the date of the contest. Thank you and good luck.

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Two For Tragedy

    I never thought I'd find the one,
    This world holds much confusion,
    Even when you said those words,
    It felt like a delusion.

    All the love I'd ever known,
    Consisted of sweet pain,
    Empty words and hurtful actions,
    Tears that fell like rain.

    I'd never known an honest love,
    All I knew was fear,
    I did the best that I knew how,
    And now the end is here.

    Your beating heart a broken stone,
    Lost to all we've done,
    Everything that we had ended,
    Before it had begun.

    My Romeo, your Juliet,
    A destiny to die,
    Dance among the shining stars,
    Love a distant cry.

    You and I, a tragedy,
    I never will forget,
    Pain and all, I love you,
    I ponder no regret.

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    As the shadows dance

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    As The Shadows Dance.

    Break the bond between the sun and moon.
    Hold too dearly, clutched to the tune -
    Of the ever dying lullaby sung within the night,
    creating such emotions, that just feel right.

    Dreaded and unmentioned, you stole away my heart.
    Swept me off my feet, to tear my body and soul apart.

    The most wondrous of dreams; elegance with beauty,
    As the shadows dance, reflecting what's meant of me.

    And, you can tear me down and break me
    in a million different pieces, left unhappy.
    But within my mind of a hearty soul,
    I'll die alive, with perfection made whole.

    So, try your best to break the bond
    between the sun and moon,
    there's no possible way, you could ever
    get through me clutched to the tune.

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Never Will I Break

    Beaten, bullied, pushed to the ground
    Heartache, misery, all that I've found
    Searching for help that never came
    Each day like the last, always the same

    Laughed at, taunted, constantly abused
    Soul broken, battered, completely confused
    Bruises, scars, showing I'd been neglected
    In my eyes, misery was reflected

    Deserted, forgotten, left all on my own
    Living in war, that was supposed to be home
    Hoping for a change, but always like before
    Realizing no one was left, nowhere to go

    Beaten, bullied, pushed to the ground
    Heartache, misery, all that I've found
    Searching for help that never came
    Each day like the last, always the same

    Until one day, realization finally hit me
    Kind of surprised, that it took so long to see
    All along they were wrong, and I was right
    Decision made, not to go down without a fight

    Focusing again, on all of my hopes and dreams
    I was better than them, and always had been
    Determined to show them, I was a shining star
    Gonna reach high in life, and make it far

    Beaten, bullied, pushed to the ground
    Heartache, misery, all that I've found
    Searching for help that never came
    Each day like the last, always the same

    I'll overcome anything and everything
    Nothing they can throw, that I can't take
    Finally learned that I'm so much stronger
    Refuse to back down, or to ever break

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    Neverland please

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Pearls Of Light please

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    When A Dead Man Walks

    Cold, alone; regret rules his mind.
    Oblivious to what surrounds, date? Time?

    Lost everything addiction killed him,
    Now hes lost, frail and thin.

    Traumatized by the whispers, the darkened looks.
    Things are invisible when a dead man walks.

    Cowering in the darkness, terrified of fate.
    Only people who want trouble walk round this late.

    No roof, no food, no future to build.
    One little mistake cost him his world.

    Will any one guide him? Allow his to express his thoughts?
    No, things are invisible when a dead man walks.

  • Melpomene
    17 years ago

    Chalice of agony please.

  • Melpomene
    17 years ago

    =Chalice Of Agony=

    Carefully summarize your story onto parchment of such defeat,
    Though do not beg me for forgiveness as you fall upon your feet,
    Burnt love will be the scent which shall wisp throughout the air,
    With the chalice of my agony I shall drink sorrowfully to despair,
    As burnt love becomes the scent which wisps throughout the air.

    Ink to crumbled paper shall scribble the words of a broken love,
    Place stamp upon letter and hold in the hand of remorseful dove,
    Entwined with velvet ribbon to represent the bond one would share,
    With the chalice of my agony I shall drink sorrowfully to despair,
    As burnt love becomes the scent which wisps throughout the air.

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    17 years ago

    Cold day in Hell please.

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    17 years ago

    Cold Day in Hell

    It'll be a cold day in Hell
    Before I ever love you.
    Freezing and breaking,
    Before I speak those words.

    It'll rain on the deserts
    Before I wish to kiss you.
    Wet and pouring,
    When I say I do.

    It shall be red in the oceans
    Before you believe I'm yours.
    Bleeding and seeping,
    You weave your illusions.

    And so Hell froze over.
    The deserts went unparched,
    And water turned to blood.
    And so I say I love you.

  • Finalgravedigger
    17 years ago

    Tears dont fall plz

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    How about the titles left? ><. Hope u will do all of them and dont forget to post your poems in time ^^.

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    *Queen of the damned*

    I stumbled upon twisted lips of deceit,
    eyes black and empty, heart of concrete;
    once queen of the damned, now can't conceit
    the power of chaos that built my defeat.

    Aesthetic collages painted empty street
    dragon's breath melted masks with alluring heat
    yet my being was shattered, drowned in effete
    playing broken tunes within every beat.

    Cracks on the soul leaked the blood till their deplete
    worn out wings collapsed, couldn't lend me on the feet;
    darkness made his kisses tempting and sweet
    as the shadows crawled down my body under the sheet;

    once queen of the damned, now can't conceit
    blissful torture of mirrored songs on repeat.

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    I just wanted to announce you that there is only one week left.Many titles are still unreserved,and maybe some of you want them ^^.Anyways, I would like to have all the poems posted in time,because I made another contest a few weeks ago and many reserved titles were missing.So please try to be punctual and if you have any problem,or a good reason to delay the posting of your poem please sent me a private message and I'll see wut I can do.Thank you for your understanding.

  • mier
    17 years ago

    Pale Enchantress

    An epitome of ancient beauty,
    she slowly dance with hypnotic grace.
    She dwells in forbidden sorcery,
    alluring charm upon a strange face.

    Defined as celestial diabolic,
    she descend into synthetic lies.
    Singing the song of her solitude,
    she smiled with somber lips and old eyes.

    Sews the stitches of mystical curse,
    upon static heart of catastrophe.
    Skeptic in death, she's never alive,
    she never was and never will be.

    Sordid wishes of a fallen disgrace,
    softly chanted with prudent madness.
    After forsaking her to beg and stray,
    spare mercy for the pale enchantress.

  • mier
    17 years ago

    Never-ending story

    Weep at your grave with succumbed forlorn,
    I held my gaze with profound sadness.
    I refuse to believe that you're gone,
    even in death, my love seem endless.

    Tied to a promise that I can't abide,
    this agony is too real and true.
    I'd give so much to last through the night,
    one dead star, the color of you.

    Ignoring the solace they gave to me,
    I smother on ample sympathy.
    They don't know you reside within me,
    exist in spirit without being seen.

    You heed helplessly at my whispered screams,
    silently dwell in phantom misery.
    I gaze longingly at you in dreams,
    with the presence of death in between.

    You linger on the other side,
    clutching at our love and lunacy.
    We will meet again after I died,
    lost in our never-ending story.

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    The world is not enough

    You're trying to tell that we'll live once more
    buying the time through vapor and silence;
    basically, ourselves we want to restore
    through the memories on abstract paintings.

    You're saying that all angels will fall,
    drowning in blood of their own malediction;
    in the middle of labyrinth we would stall,
    temptation consume us, swallow our souls.

    You believe that there's no ultimate defence
    for the raising waves of inner blackness;
    hypnotizing crystals lull us into trance
    so we stare in the blank screen, gasp for air.

    For all forgotten heroes the hymn now rings
    replay all magically wrecked, dusty tunes,
    besides anticipation and pain that your voice brings
    the world is not enough for my brothers- fallen ones.

    I'm united with the tides of cosmic hues
    succumbed to brand new starlight visions,
    walked towards footsteps of my muse,
    without listening any of your words.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    White Night Fantasy

    The spray of the sea can caress our face with the lick of salty air;
    Cliffs seem to tumble with the clouds, in the event of something fair.
    Our lips send chills down our spines and sends the waters crashing against the sand;
    If you beckon closely, our hearts will melt in time under the muted direction of your hands.
    You can whisper, whisper softly
    Into these deaf ears of mine.

    Syncopating to the rhythm the night creates for us in event we fall to tender devotion;
    A tremble and shake with the tune of the moon behind our hips, will complete our trembling motions.
    Salt spits in our face in jealous anticipation to dance with the sea as the stars dance with the moon;
    Cliffs seem to tumble with the air in the event we forget to land and the farther I swoon.
    I'm falling and it's all in my head
    All in my head...
    All in my head.

    The moon can glance past our mouth and touch us with his understanding finger tips;
    Yet if he threatens to steal your breath, I'll have to ask you not to breathe harsh past your lips.
    In protest to the harsh tone of reality, the sands are crackling against the wind;
    The tides rise in beat with our swaying hips and the greater we've sinned.
    They say: you're too beautiful to understand
    It's all gone, all gone.

    But they say: you're too beautiful to understand
    It's all gone
    It's all gone.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    PLEASE POST YOUR POEMS AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. THAT MEANS 24 HOURS. ON THE 26TH I WILL POST THE RESULTS. SO PLEASE HURRY. THANK YOU.
    ANDRA.

  • Simple Sensation
    17 years ago

    Servant of the Bones

    I am a servant of the bones;
    Making me do anything to reveal...
    You whip lashes of stones;
    And yet I try so hard to conceal...

    I am a slave of the scale;
    Craving to never once gain...
    You; make me so frail;
    And you whisper; "You deserve pain"...

    I am a servant of the bones;
    Turning warmth cold...
    You sit high on the throne;
    And I instantly do what I'm told...

    I am a slave of the scale;
    Shiver as the tear slither...
    Yet you always seem to prevail -
    And you always make me wither.

    A servant of bones and
    A slave of the scale...
    I wonder, will they always be my identity?
    I wonder, will I ever be free?

    Simple Sensation
    24 October 2007

    (I'll hopefully have the secound reservation up tomorow after school - is that ok? Im sorry it's late..)

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    Since you are not over with all the postings,the contest will end on the 30th of october. Do your best to post them.

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    Finalgravedigger
    Simple Sensation
    HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex
    My Decadent
    Gem
    HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    These are the ones that didn't publish their poems. Some of them both of their reserving, and some just one. So please, do your best to make your poems. thanks.

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    >.< i posted my poem. it's up there somewhere, "Never will i break"

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    Yeah, sry. My bad, I'm really tired >>.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    So we got until the 30th now? I`m sorry Dear, I`ve just been really stressed and busy. I`ll do my best.