Yeah!

Hi everyone!
Good day,

Heres the deal, if anyone of you do any of my oldies
i will return 2 times

My poems-

-My World
-Portrait
-Young Crusader
-Puzzled words
-Greed
-State of the nation address

Rule:
Must vote/ no one liners
or expect same in return

(I want more critiques on here, the best comments,
some advise and tips. I wanted to know if my poetry is good or what)

Thanks.