One for One

I am looking for some opinions on my newest poem, so I will comment & rate your poems, honestly, if you do the same for me. Thank you very much, just leave your poem's name or URL, and we are all set.

My poem's name is "My Pain Is Me," I hope you enjoy!

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=958516

Is the poem that bad? >.>

Sheesh.

"Outlooks and Requiems" please.

And no, it's not a bad poem at all.

Did it

could you do "getting away with murder" please

Cool, great poems guys, would anyone else like a one for one deal?

To reiterate: My poem's name is "My Pain Is Me," I hope you enjoy!

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=958516