3 for 6!!!

Hi! Can you all comment on 3 of mine and i'll definatly commment on 6 of yours! (please more than one liners, and critique it, telling me what i can work on to make my poetry better...that'd be awesome and i'll definalty comment yous!!!!)

I'll go read three of yours. Of my six the few i want you to read are, Where is God, The Sea, To the world I once loved, and three others of your choice thanks