MickeysBabyGurl-New Poem Comment plz. Life of a Lonley Stoner Gi

Ok i wrote a poem pretty much about my life...everything that has happened in it...it would be MUCH appreciated if you could comment on it...it would mean A LOT! i know a lot of the lines are really long and the flow isn't very good but i just wanted to write my life down in one poem i guess...

---for reading 'Life of a Lonely Stoner Girl' i will commment 5 of your poems...
but you MUST leave titles of the poems you would like me to do otherwise no deal.

Done. i dont know my titles but do all the ones under rencent

Done. i dont know my titles but do all the ones under rencent

Friendship forvrr lost
forever and always
growing love
one of these days
good times

Ok...i will work on them...i might be able to get them done today but im not sure...i will get them done tho...

Anyone else?

Sexyproudmommy-your done...

Anyone?