NEW POEM!!!

Can everyone r/r/c my new poem and some of the old ones? I will return the favor 3x's that.

If you do, let me know the ones you want me to comment.
Thanks in advance.

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

All right, I'm on my way to comment your 18 poems.

Anyone else wanna help out?

Just write me the list here and r/r/c them.

Thanks.

Anyone else wanna help out?

I commented where did it go wrong :p cheers
Xx...[retro babii]...xX

All right retro I'll do your poems right now, thanks.

Anyone else?

Anyone else wanna help out?

Did "roses", a really nice line.
Please comment and vote for my followings:
- What would I do without you?
- any other two you didn't comment for yet

Thanks and have a pleasant read.

I'll do your newest, can you do these 2 for me?

The Beauty Of His Soul
I See Him Strong

thanks so much!

Shinobi and Mousy, you're done.

Anyone else?