~Petes Title Contest

!~CLOSED FOR JUDGING~!

!~CLOSED - RESULTS AT BOTTOM~!

Titles:-
14) Death Around The Corner (Jess - Done)
7) Words of Wisdom (Jess - Done)
26) All Out (Jess - Done)
18) No More Pain (Romancing the darker side - Done)
30) Dear Mama (Gack60 - Done)
25) Happy Home (Gack60 - Done)
4) Still I Rise (Beautiful Chaos - Done)
22) Cradle To The Grave (Beautiful Chaos - Done)
17) Only God Can Judge Me (Dixiedaisy - Done)
11) Something Wicked (Dixiedaisy - Done)
8) Do For Love (Nikki - Done)
2) Better Days (Nikki - Done)
13) So Many Tears (Nikki - Done)
34) Unconditional Love (Paige - Done)
19) Check Out Time (MyEscape - Done)
15) Life Goes On (Teria - Done)
31) Troublesome (Britt - Done)
3) Me Against The World (xPinkDizzyTeacupx - Done)
33) How Long Will They Mourn Me? (xPinkDizzyTeacupx - Done)
29) Untouchable (xPinkDizzyTeacupx - Done)
10) Only Fear Of Death (Decay In The Dark - Done)
35) God Bless The Dead (Decay In The Dark - Done)
23) Under Pressure (Roxiee An - Done)
5) Until The End Of Time (debbylyn - Done)
12) Temptations (Veamm - Done)
20) Keep Your Head Up (Veamm - Done)

Prizes:
1st - Added to Faves, 20 R/R/C
2nd - Added to Faves 10 R/R/C
3rd - 10 R/R/C
4th - 5 R/R/C
5th - 3 R/R/C
HM - 1 R/R/C

Oh i so wanna do more than 2. ummm. may i please reserve.

8) Do For Love, but can i change the title to the things i do for love

and for my 2nd can i please have

6) Better Days

Lol, mine aren't gonna be happy either, i've been real depressed lately so i'm gonna write about how i feel atm. hope thats ok.

That title change is fine Nikki,
If you like the titles .. give it a few days and if there's a lack of interest you can take as many as you want hun.

~Pete

Hi? can I reserve

-Keep your head up
-Temptations

hmm? any dead lines for this?

Yeah, deadline is posted at the top - on or around 26/11/2007

Cool.....May I reserve Only God can judge me
And I am going to attempt a second one
Changed Man

I love Tupac, glad to see someone do a contest on him.

Can I please reserve Hearts of Men

Cheers bro dear mama for me, how many can i pick

No matter i just seen it, ill do happy home too m8y plz

fank you!!!!!

Still I Rise & Cradle To The Grave please

Only God Can Judge Me

The wicked wait for me to self destruct
Saintly sinners, self righteous, corrupt
Never succumbing I walk with chin up

Daggers of hate shoot from their tongue
Stabbing at me, no rest til their done
Never minding them, I continue to walk on

Let them cast stones upon my skin
Practice deceit, let their web spin
Cause only God knows how it will end

Heaven or Hell, my sin's he'll atone
Only he knows the remorse I've shown
Alpha and Omega, his decision alone

Life Goes On, please.

Amazing Titles, Pete. (:

Dear Mama

For all the times you stood by me,
When all I did was wrong.
You helped me through bad times,
When I was weak you made me strong.

You made me see the goodness,
Inside each and every one.
You are my guiding star,
Which I always depended on.

You've been there for me,
Through the good times and the bad.
You helped me feel happy,
Whenever I was sad.

You're the one I turn to,
When anythings amiss.
You turn a blind eye to it,
Cos ignorance is bliss.

If I ever need anything,
All I do is ask.
If u can solve my problem,
It never seems a task.

You've been my inspiration,
All the way through my life.
You even helped me with the choice,
Of who should be my wife.

Now its time to return the favor,
And always be there for you.
Cos it's time for me to prove,
That I love you too.

Still I Rise

Writhing on the dirty floor,
I strive to reach my feet,
I may not win every round,
But never, I'll retreat.

Words which drip with poison,
Will never reach my soul,
Falling for one moment,
Again, I shall rise whole.

Bruise my skin, break a bone,
This too, time will heal,
Never will you take my spirit,
It's not yours to steal.

Push me down while stepping up,
Swell your head with pride,
Your bitter end will be your doing,
Truth won't be denied.

Lend a hand or face the flames,
Learn to love, grow wise,
No matter how they push you down,
Lift them as you rise.

No More Pain please.

These days seem to never pass,
They're constant loops of Nows.
Showered on by shattered emotions,
Perplexed I wondered how.

Death entombed my shadows,
They all came to vivid life.
Bearing down upon my shoulders,
I stood and took the knife.

Hateful, meaningless words,
Came down upon my head.
My ears echoed with silence.
My heart ached with dread.

Walking in the darkness,
I dare to drown the rain.
Blood pours out from my soul,
There's forever no more pain.

Ok, here is my first, sorry it's kinda long, it is about how i am feeling at the moment.. hope its ok.

The things i do for love

by Nikki

There is one man in this world that I completely admire
He has always been my love, my life, my complete desire
But there are some things that he still doesnt know
One things is that the fire in my heart is now not an inferno

When we first got together, it burned so high and bright
And for so long, I kept telling myself it would be alright
But it was while ago, and a lot has changed since then
I realize I have lied to myself, time and time again

I feel I have given up my life, just to be his slave
But it seems the whole time, attention is what I craved
To hear him give me compliments, to once say Im sexy
To once hear him say, that I am the only one he fancys

But I never get any of that, never get treated like Im special
I want the man back, who was so sweet to me, and gentle
I stay with him not by choice, but because he is in my heart
I stay in this house everyday, hoping we will never depart

I have cleaned up after him, for two very long years now
Cooked food when he was hungry, did what my body would allow
But in the end, I never got a thank you, never did he realize
Just how much I adore him, not once did he hear my cries

Until that one day I told him, just what I do to keep him happy
I have an eating disorder & depression, I am always feeling crappy
But these are things, that I would do for him over and over again
These things I have said should show how much I love this man

I have battled thick and thin, to get through these days
Now the spark in my heart, is again completely ablaze
He is the man I get out of bed for, my one angel from above
But all these things I mentions show the things I do for love

Ok here is my 2nd one, this is also about how i feel at the moment, i dont feel very good, so yeah. the poems explain what is going through my head.

Better days

by Nikki

I remember the day that we first laid eyes on each other
The was the day my heart lost its shielded cover
I got butterflies in my stomach when ever we spoke
I had never felt so scared, but my words never did choke

I remember the day you finally asked me to your house
When we got inside you kissed me and unbuttoned my blouse
I had tingles in my body, I did not know what to do
But in the end of that, my body had an amazing break through

I remember the days when we would go for a walk
Just lye by the river and continuously do nothing but talk
Then when we went home, you always held my hand
You held me close and told me, it will never end

I remember the days when all we did was smile
To know that one day we would be walking down the aisle
When we had a baby, we knew we would stay together
But what I didnt realize is that it would last forever

Those were the days I now wish we could still flaunt
But now they are only in my memories, there to taunt
To this day we have not split up, we are still here as one
But I never knew the man I fell in love with would come undone

What happened to him, I guess I will never ever know?
But I love him with all my heart so I will go with the flow
These days I remember were so loving and complete
But ever since these days, it has done nothing but deplete

I wish that instead of memories, I had this in reality again
But these days are gone, and the memories are my only friend
I miss the day where we would stare at each other in a gaze
I guess there gone, but they were and are always, the better days

I wanna do another, god i love your titles

OK, Nikki .. Take another title if you really want to - I'll increase it to 3 per person and add a few more titles.

~Pete.

Yeaaaa, can i please have for my 3rd

13) So Many Tears

I would like to reserve, "me against the world" "Untouchable" && "How long will they mourn me" please and thank you!

Here is my 3rd, this one is true, i have had depression for 6 years now, an eating disorder for 4 years, i have always had a low self esteem due to a bad childhood and i have had OCD all my life, and i have been self harming myself for about 2-3 years, i started it in school.. hope this is ok.

So many tears

by Nikki

So many tears always fill up behind my eyes
Hiding the fact that I always want to cry
To let out my anger, get rid of my pain
Help me get through life before I go insane

I want to cry about always self harming myself
But it makes me feel better more than anything else
I hate that it doesnt hurt me anymore at all
The razor blade waiting for my next down fall

I hate that I am always feeling so depressed
It always makes me feel like I am being suppressed
But it never goes away, it just eats at my mind
Waiting for me to stuff up, and for my life to unwind

I cannot eat, no matter what I have tried
This disorder I have is eating me alive
I am starving myself, always have a frown
My doctors said my muscles will shut down

I also have low self esteem, I know I am ugly
I wish I could look good, all pretty and bubbly
I just once want to feel good about being me
But when I look into the mirror, ugliness is what I see

On top of all that, I have obsessive compulsive disorder
Do you think it would hurt if I planned my own murder?
You might not believe that one person could have all this
And believe me I have them, my life has gone amiss

The tears that I always cry, never ever stay away
I am not writing this to put my life on display
I am merely telling the truth to get it of my chest
Having so many tears, is some thing I know best

Ok thats all i can do, good luck everyone, and thanks for an awesome contest pete....

Cradle To The Grave

The moment you were born,
I knew I'd never be the same,
My life was just beginning,
A mother, I became.

Your smiling eyes were full of hope,
Faith emerged that day,
Showed me life was beautiful,
All would be okay.

A tiny child within my arms,
Forever I'd protect,
A piece of me from deep inside,
That time came to perfect.

It doesn't matter how you grow,
Or how old you come to be,
I'll always be there watching you,
This I guarantee.

Angry moments, bitter words,
Won't keep me from your side,
For surely when we've laughed in life,
At times we will have cried.

We won't agree on everything,
Rebellion is a need,
And even when you pull away,
My love will not recede.

There's nothing that I would not face,
Nothing I won't do,
From the cradle to the grave,
My heart will beat for you.

Check out time plz!

*ME*

Check Out Time

A jaded woman with a broken heart
He builds her up, let's her fall apart
So she took everything she owns
Packed up and headed out alone.

A full tank of gas, and a wet receipt
From the tears falling on her seat
Where she's going is up in the air
But it's better than going back there.

They were only dating, but he's a jerk
And she got tired of feeling hurt
So she told her mama it was time to leave
Before love was past her belief.

Down the highway, hours have passed
She's feeling tired. Her eyes relax.
So she pulls to a broken-down inn
All her thoughts come flooding again.

Lying on a mattress, the t.v's on.
She's wondering if she'll really stay gone.
A hundred messages are on her phone.
He'll say he's sorry, to come back home.

It'll be okay, for a short little while
'Till he's ready to break up the smiles.
She makes up her mind, and falls asleep.
The first night of rest, feels good and deep.

In the morning she doesn't rush to pack.
Her mind is focused, fully on track.
She looks at the clock, and in her mind
Knows it's okay to miss the check out time.

By: *ME*

Life Goes On.

You're just as the rats that eat at our crumbs,
with minds so feeble with a heart to succumb.
Little left to even evoke, leaving it a bit harder for me.
Since it's all taken, the joy of the evil we can't see.
It's laying in your heart, burning in flames.
Don't you feel the heat my father?

Seen within your eyes; the hightened anger arising.
What's the matter, fear's not all that suprising.
It lives within each wordly, mortal soul;
That's why they're extremely careful.
They can see it in you, father -
all that evil that seems to be a`rising.

Yet, life goes on for them and dies for you.
It doesn't seem all that fair that you can't make it through.
But, life isn't fair. . . you'll just have to deal.
Since, I really don't care evil does feel -
It's laying in your heart, burning in flames.
Don't you feel the heat my father?

And heres number 2.

HAPPY HOME.

What is a happy home, and how is it defined?
I don't think it's the same as the image that i've got in my mind.

I think a happy home should be full of glee,
But mine just seems to be cram packed, full of misery.

Arguments and shouting are heard from day to day,
Sometimes I'm not even sure of the role I'm supposed to play.

One day i'm the good guy, the next day i should be bad,
I know the role I want to play, and that's the one of "dad".

Is there really such a thing as normal family life,
Or is everyday supposed to be a war between me and my wife.

If I could change things for the better, i'd do here and now,
I'll make life better for my wife and kids, if someone just tells me how.

The thing that hurts most, seems to be that of financial strain,
Without this burden upon our house, we would be free from pain.

My wife and I would get along, and we'd live like families should,
I'll vow to do whatever I can to shunt our lives from bad to good.

Let me open the valves and release the steam, from this pressure dome
I'll do anything i need to do, to turn this house into a happy home.

Trapped plz!
*ME*

I would like to have the title

Under pressure

things are already popping up in my Mind

Would you plz reserve it and If possible at all send me a pm regarding the confirmation cos I would be accessing the site from my mobile

thanks and no prob if you wont

:-)

Okay I have one reserved I haven't finished yet but may I add a third title as well pleassssse. Something wicked......This is awesome.
Love the titles BTW

Until The End Of Time please

Until The End Of Time

Until the end of time
Through shades of dappled gray
While stems deny the pluck
I gather what I may

In my wild abandon
I sow my scattered seeds
Hoping for a meadow
I overlook the weeds

Gathering then the thistle
Around my wild bouquet
Dry and bare in patches
I still delight the day

Until the end of time
Through cycles of rebirth
I'll plant again my flowers
Then pluck them from the earth

Yay debbylyn - I thought you would never enter. Glad you decided to. (^^ ,)

For you Britt - it could be a dead hamster.

Reserve accepted.

I guess I'll let it slide - just this once though.
(^^ ,)

I know you could, and probably will write a new one anyways. If you want to enter this one .. it's fine Britt.

~Pete.

Under pressure by Roxiee An

I got out of the way
and the bullet hit her deep
NOt a single breath heard thereon
Under pressure,
All alone I stood against you all

Yeah! They call me a coward
Am the enemy's friend to you all
In life, We were a single united heart
Under pressure,
The number of bodies were reduced to one

The shot had my name
My intutions changed the fate
Instead of choosing to die and go
Under pressure,
I wrote my destiny as to die and stay

I have two small children
Me being the sole earner in the house
could have saved her, I know
under pressure,
The foresights dominated my soul

Her loss is breking me up
But the sweet memories last forever
wish I could exchange the roles of us both
Under pressure,
I still fear for the darkness of the hell

YOu can see my trust was weak
thought a boy can be better alone
made that unhuman decision without emotions
Under pressure,
I had to take up the God's dirty job

thnx

10) Only Fear Of Death
35) God Bless The Dead

Thanx.. :)