Haiku madness!!! TRIPLE comments <1st 5 only>

For the first five people to comment on my three haikus, I will triple your comments +1 so 10 comments for you for 3 comments (r/r/c) on my haikus, my haikus are:

Night Sky [triple haiku]
As Dark as the Moon
&
Trapped in an Onyx Dream

They're quick and easy poems to read, all sorts of criticism is welcome, and if you're going to leave a one-liner make it worthwhile please!

also, if you're going to leave comments, spelling things correctly would be nice. thank you!

Im working on it now..plz do ne of mine u like

Done with commenting ur poems))

Ok I finished yours, good poems!

I'm ready for more!

On my way.

Please do any of my latest, unless you'd rather I gave you the titles first.
xx

Done. You can do any of mine, but do my 4 latest. Thanks!!!

Okie Dokie - done those three, I think I read them in the wrong order though.

Nice work.

Could you do,
Seasonal ABC's [Tongue Twister]
Though art a votary to fond desire
Lost Angel
Sins of Omission
Time Stands still
&& any of the others that take your fancy.

Thanks in advance.

~Pete.

On my way to work, PROMISE to do, thank you guys. no more comments or requests please I want to comment first on the people above who have so graciously read my poems