One for three, maybe more (first ten people)

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    "ana, you win" comment that, i will do three of your's. if i like them i may do four or five. NO one liners. or i wont reply to ANY of your's. don't know what to say? tell me what you liked and disliked and why. what i'm doing wrong and right. how to improve it etc. leave titles or links. p.s i'm aware i still owe comments from my previous thread. i have free time tomorrow so i will be doing both threads. i'm not ignoring it if anybody thinks i am. thank you. have a nice day.

  • Vincent Thornsberry
    17 years ago

    Got it done go ahead and read
    1:Betrayal
    2:Unhinged
    Your choice on the third one. I'm not picky
    Good job btw

  • FridusBlueheaven
    17 years ago

    I've done with yours. Very beautiful one....
    Please do three of these...

    "A Girl With Beautiful Mask"
    "Small Town"
    "Well Deserved Man"
    "The Sojourner"
    "Still Here"
    "Luckiest Man"

    Thanks a lot before. I wish you could have time to do this favor!!!

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Zeenat, you're done.

    I have to leave shortly, so I will continue these later tonight.
    xx

  • Stephanie
    17 years ago

    Sure. :)

    Could you please do:
    This Isn't Me
    The Most Beautiful, Deadliest Rose
    Realizations [Italian Sonnet]

    Thanksss.
    -- Steph <3

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Okay. I haven't had chance to get online much. I'll finish these tomorrow. Thank you in advance for your patience :)

  • JustKristina
    17 years ago

    Hey hey hey! i'm on my way to comment your poem, you can just pick any of my poems, whatever catches your eyes

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    All done.

    Anyone else?

    Four more people and I'm closing this down.
    xx