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  • Pete
    17 years ago

    Hi,

    I'm especially looking for newer members poetry to read and comment on. (I will do senior members poems too though) Post titles or links, your call.

    My only condition is that it has a rhyme scheme of some sort.

    Consider yourself warned in advance...My comments are very descriptive and honest.

    Bring it on.

    ~Pete.

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    You have my apologies in advance zeenat - I think I got slightly carried away in the last comment I left you - it's close to 300 words long.

  • Nightmare Fiend
    17 years ago

    Omg yay! Can you comment any of my poems, thanks alot!

  • Nigel Oliver
    17 years ago

    Hii pete,

    I would love if you commented on my 2 newest pieces xD

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=972917

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=973025

    I really appreciate it

    ~nigel~

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    I'll get on both of yours now.

    ~Pete.

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    Midnight Kill - Yours are done... Absolutely wonderful poems, so vivid and dark.

    Nice work.

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    OH OH OH.

    Can you please do

    "Ana, You Win."

    &&

    "It's To Late For Words."

    Thank you, dear =)

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    Nigel Oliver - Yours are done. I would honestly hate to be trapped in your mind for even a minute.

    To the others below Nigel... Give me 10 minutes to let the steam go from my fingers. I will get to you - honest.

    ~Pete.

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    PositiveAspect - You are done. I would like to apologise for the comment I left on the domino poem. I don't think that piece was entirely for my palate. You will understand once you have read the comment.

    ~Pete.

    PinkDizzy- Thanks for having patience, yours are all done now.

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    OK I'm closing this as it's late in the UK, and my fingers hurt.

    Thanks to all the people that posted their poems, you helped me to pass the night away.

    Sleep well all, I bid you adieu.

    ~Pete.
    **CLOSED**