1 for 3 For the one I love

Please comment and vote for my new poem: For the one I love. I will return with three comments and votes for any of your poems. One liners won't count as a comment. Please leave titles.
Comments expressing what you felt when reading the poem or just saying what your fav stanza was will be considered as a one liner.
Please be honest while commenting so I know how to improve.

Thanks and have a pleasant read

If you do any one of my other poems, the deal would be 1 for 1.

Done! Anyone else?

I did urs

One2many - although your comment was as helpful as a one liner, I gave you your three comments.

Done, anyone else?

Alexis - I treated "Abused and Broken" as two poems because of it's length.

Done, anyone else?