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Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

New poem:
"Closure"

It is done for a contest and I truly need some honest feedback on it. I will, of course, return the favor on three of your poems. I take time to leave thoughtful comments therefore I expect the same in return.

thank you :]

PS. happy thanksgiving!

Name : Normal is the Watchword
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Normal is the Watchword
17 years ago

Depends on if you give one liners our thoughtful comments whether I will take the deal or not. Let me know which you do. If it's leaning toward one liners than I'll just read and comment and not ask for you to do the same unless you want to.

- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

I never leave one-liners.

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Name : Normal is the Watchword
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Normal is the Watchword
17 years ago

I left you a comment, just of advice not being harsh so I hope you don't take it that way :) I only have four poems so you can pick what you like. I will check yours out later in the day. You have a decent style more than I've seen lately on this site. I can't finish a poem I don't like but I managed to finish yours and want more.

- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

RoadandtheRadio:
done, thank you for you comment on my poem, it was very much appreciated and I truly enjoyed reading your poetry.

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
17 years ago

Done. :]

Could you please comment on:

+ A Love That's Void of Emotion
+ Forget Me Not
+ Cold City Streets

Thank you.

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

SecludedSerendipity:
done

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

Anyone else?

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- Name : Melpomene
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Melpomene
17 years ago

Will do it now.
My latest 3 please =].

Thanks alot. ~Mel

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- Name : Stephanie
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Stephanie
17 years ago

Done, fantastic job too. :]]

Could you do my latest 3?
Thankss.

-- Steph. <33

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

Thank you all for your comments
you are all done

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- Name : Stephanie
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Stephanie
17 years ago

Thankss for the comments. :) They mean a lot.

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

You are very welcome
You know I enjoy reading your work :]

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

Anyone else?

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- Name : ABake
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ABake
17 years ago

I will do it. Lol. If you could please do my most recent. Thanks ahead of time. (:

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

Knee Deep In Emotions:
you are done and thank you for you comment :]

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Name : FridusBlueheaven
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FridusBlueheaven
17 years ago

Done with Closure and I enjoyed it....

Please do mine that catches your eye. I have few and seems you have read many of mine. Check out that you never done before...

Thanks a bunch!!!

- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

FridusBlueheaven:
done

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

Anyone else?

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

I R Jordannn:
you are done.
:]

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

Anyone else?

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
17 years ago

I still need some input ..

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